My Secret Date

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I like it so far I hope it can be more chapters to add to it my lkids love this Story so that makes it a plus for me and I really enjoy reading it thank u so much

I've never been a fan of this author but since LOTM is such a favorite of mine i figured this might be a good read too. Sadly this was not the case, in fact the comparison only makes the flaws even more glaringly obvious. The saying "show don't tell" describes why this novel feels so dull, nothing is ever shown only told. The world is called steampunk instead of it being shown through technology, culture or architecture. The characters have personalities that are told to the reader and never showed through their actions. Everything follows this trend.For me the most disappointing part is the system, it invalidates the mystery and intrigues of the supernatural and turns it into a hack and slash adventure.Sadly this not another LOTM, it's a litrpg power fantasy written by a mediocre author set in a decent world.

Quality drops after chaptrer 40, plus alot of filler that becomes nauseating to read. Before chapter 41 its still a decent read though. A decisive main character with some grounded logic, while also having some refreshing wit. Its a fun read, too bad the translation and story development drop considerably.

I like the beginning of the novel as the author is able to create wonderful world. The characters presented so far are relatable to the reader to a certain degree that allows for the reader to instantly connect. Overall, 5 stars all around and I would give more if I could.

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