It started out very good but around chapter 80 the story just gets nonsensical and directionless. There is no goal or reason for the things that the MC does. He for example helps some human because that human has heard of a legend that MAYBE there is a way to help is parents and for that reason alone he goes on a suicide and the MC who doesn't even know the guy or has any connection and has way more important things to do during that time, for no reason suddenly decides to risk everything and follows and carries that guy and constantly risks his life just so they can go to even more dangerous areas of a pocked dimension.
A truly Amazing book, most of the grammar is correct, the story is really in, interesting, I like the concept of where he is overpowered but doesn’t accept it and starts like a normal human, albeit a extremely strong one, I really like the novel. it’s brilliant.
Man I wish you would continue writing ur novel, it was one of the novels i looked forward to updating everyday. Dont let those losers keep u down man, have a good one
i love the story so keep on writing ok and hope your doing ok and be on good health when writing this and make sure you check when finish and check if it good or not and post it ok and thank you very much.
Okay, I've written about 145 chapters as of writing this, and it's time I update my initial review.Firstly Writing Quality: Once again, I'm not native, but I feel I've done a decent job. The grammar isn't superb, but its readable, to the point where people can still enjoy reading.Stability of Updates: Ooof, well my update stability has been horrible for the past few weeks due to other projects. But I'm back on track. Hopefully you guys see my new novel come up on your recommends.Story Development: I've taken a slow pace approach at writing, and its paying off. There's a sense of gratification in the later chapters, seeing all everything coming together. I'm also proud of the plotlines I've implemented. If you follow along, you can see there is an overarching plot, and small scale plots. Things become very exciting past chapter 120.Character Design: Suprisingly, I'm more impressed with the side character then the main character. Not to say that the main character is bad, he's just somewhat inconsistent at times, as I sometimes forget what his background used to be. But all his mishaps can be explained, though to be honest, it mostly because I'm still an amateur. As for mt favourite character? Conspiracist leafling.World Background: 6/5 I'm very proud of the world I've built. Quite unique, type of stuff you can't read anywhere else. The only race you will know of are the humans, and maybe Fae, apart from that, you're in for a treat.
story is straight forward , I hope to see more chapters along the way.
i just read until chapter 47. this novel is zombies but have a cultivation vibe. this novel is very similiar like typical chinese novel with brainless mc, no world brackground and cliche plot. forced my brain to read but can't handle it anymore. if you are going to waste your time then go ahead.
To everyone that reads this: I'm writing out of fun and im not from England, Amerika etc where you speak english so please forgive me if you see some grammar mistakes or something.I would also be really grateful if you write some feedbacks so that i can see how i can improve myself. Thanks
This is one of the few novels I've consistently read since I found out about it and is one of the best crafted stories I've ever found. I would highly recommend this to anyone who is interested in a cultivation novel and if you like this genre I doubt you'll regret reading it.I particularly appreciate the intelligence of the main character and find his personality very convincing. Also, I typically skip through battles in novels like these because I feel like they drag out too long, but here I can't think of many times where I felt like the story dragged them out too long.
This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. It feels like heaven to read, I wanna read it so much. If this novel got some drive, then thanked God its still alive. This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this.I need this novel like it's quite all right. I need this novel to warm my lonely nights. Just read this novel, cause I... say...Shameless Promotion:Check out my novel: Crowning Cruel Crow. Hahaha. https://m.webnovel.com/book/crowning-cruel-crow_18100192205265505
This looks promising ???.
if you are looking for a story with developments, this is not the choice, this book is a little tedious, it is a monologue of Mc with everything else. I want, I take it, I feel like it, I do it, I have it, I realize it. There is nothing surprising, just a lazy mc who chooses op power to make a harem.