Beginner work made on a whim, can't see this going anywhere
I just love Culitivation story’ s that the mc is op
Decir que me gustó mucho la historia pero el desarrollo de los personajes como son las esposas deja mucho que desear y bueno me gustaría que siguiera la segunda parte y hablara más de sus esposas
It's a really good story I would admit but it could use some improvements but it's good actually there are some parts where the get was wrong but it's nots a boring story I guess my point here is that the story is great
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It is a really wonderful novel, I hope that it would be updated more often. I'm already waiting for further developments in the story. ????
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
to put it simply this book is the perfect example of a very good concept completly destroyed by dreadful grammer and even horrible story progression..i understand the MC having an edge over everyone else becase of the scince from his old world helping him comprehend stuff better but all he seems to do is recitate facts like a bloody walking wikipedia and boom..he goes from mortal to demigod in THREE!.days.and even with all this knowledge he eventually used all his "prodigious insight" from his world to become the god of CHESS ..i stopped reading at that point....
Probably shouldn't review my own work but Idgaf.gggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg
The author himself doesn't know what masterpiece he has created. I'm in awe of this story. I believe it is going to be a bang. It's truly something unfathomable. Not unlike all the other romance WN.
A fantasy novel set in a video game world is nothing original, but how my story will be told certainly is. It will be from an NPC's perspective, and what the players see is vastly different to what the NPCs experience.My English is at native-level, unlike some cancer on this site.Enjoy it or don't. Feel free to reply with questions, feedback, or the usual spam.