The premise of the story is quite interesting, and I like the depiction of Elspeth's character. Except for Alan... Ugh, I feel like punching him in his face!By the way, each volume is too fast. Imo, you could extend one volume to cover many chapters, explaining each character's background and more before moving on to the next volume.
the worm hole was discovered there was a hell of a delight running through the
"Okay, Carl, you're a smart and good kid, why are you doing this?"
Dark took the knife and scratched his hand and then the blood flowed into the cauldron.
Then he rope my hand to the hand chair.
"No~ well let's forget that and move on besides I'm really hungry now"
Thanks for the great chapter. I think that Sakumo's busy 'making' Kakashi.
After that many leafs that were strengthen with armament Haki appeared and attacked Trebol who was unprepared.
"I'm ember, and this is Valencia, You can call him Ace."
That jerk of a Crown Prince is really a pain in the ass.
"So was the mission a success?" Hiruzen inquired. "Yes lord hokage" Asuma said.
Remember: Y/N is very spoilt as you were rich all your life.