I looovve this bookReading it makes me remember a plethora of fantasy books I've read. The intrigue???Who knows... This author might be the next Rick Riordan, Cassandra Clare or even Sarah J Maas
It’s good, definitely needs a little editing work done. Once that’s done it’ll be even better. Excited for more chapters! Also needs to spell some of the names the same. Noticed Cedric was spelled also Cedrik. I have enjoyed the world building so far and the different characters.
I enjoyed the latest chapter very much and thanks for the mass release author keep up the good work.Brilliant plot, good quality writing, and I like how you brought the Hindu culture about the devas and asuras and their realms in this novel and am waiting for them to make their appearance, but I know it will not happen so soon.
demasiados pocos capítulos para poder poner una reseña, tiene potencial.
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while the story and world background are intriguing, I feel that there is a lack of descriptions for the characters' physical appearance
Love the story! It is very interesting. Very unusual. There is a lot of cursing in the story, but it is adding to the story. It makes it more realistic!
The story is very unusual. The main character just tries to live his life while using the gaming club. It is not sure where the story will get but I am looking for it.
As of chapter 39:On the grammar front this fanfic is okay and I couldn't find any mistakes.On the plot side this fanfic progress okay and I didn't get bored while reading or found any plot hole. The characters themselves also feel alive and not mechanical or robotic. The harem and s*x is also not forced or illogical but flowed quite well.Overall, I will give this fanfic five stars
It looks good so far, I wonder what next will happen, hmm, though Author San you didn't mention when one awakens a ability ???????????????????????????????????????
I love all of your novels, especially when looking back to your past writing and seeing how much you have improved, not to mention that the majority of your stories are connected one way or another, please keep up the good work can’t see what you come up with
Oh my just two chapters in a I can already tell that this story is gonna be fun! I've experienced several emotions already and I love when an author can capture the scenes very essence in just a few words that pull you in and keep you captivated, that's what Glimmy has done with this story in just two chapters and I can't wait for the next update! If you haven't checked out any of her other books you really should (this story will be the 6th one in my library). Such an incredible and powerful writer!I will update this at the end of the month after more chapters have been released & Glimmy updates regularly ❤️.Much love to you Glimmy, thank you for sharing your gift with all of us and super excited to be riding with you from the beginning.