Only at chapter 20 for now, but it's good I say LMAO. The only cons I could think of are the draggy words, but there are not too many of them so it's bearable. Overall, this is a unique find. Worth the read.
Great so far. But the author should look for a different interpretation of the cover because to me it just makes me think of Solo Leveling after reading the description. Look I get there was inspiration but dang those sure do look like shadowbeasts
Ok so I'm making this review of your novel all because I've been curious as to what it was like, first of all your grammar it's not bad but its also not great for example in some lines where you should be using past tense words you use their present tense, and the way your wrote his "system" was too long, and to be fair I was like that too when I first started writing you can correct that by breaking down his system instead of putting everything all at once, that's all tbh I made this cuz of your review on my novel a couple days ago and to be honest with you there's nothing wrong with my English and my novel isn't that bad, I just came back to writing after a whole year of taking a break so...
The story is engaging need more chapters
GOD damn it I'm in love ??? with this novel could ?? please updates more
The title picked my interest because I like a strong FL tgat won't succumb just in the name of Love. Unfortunately, as the strory progresses it becomes the old cliche where the FL becomes weak in the name of still loving the guy and just because she bears his child. Come on in this life co-parenting is common and for ince I want yo see an author that can write a real FL that fight for woman's dignity. Sorrry to drop this novel.
Hello, Blizzard here!As the author of this book, I love it and am sure you are going to love it too. Don't believe me? Then give it a try.Now, some things to note.1) From my experience, I know readers don't like a pure smut novel (there are always exceptions though) and need a good story to go along with it so they can enjoy both things better. So, the storyline is main in this book and lemons and other things are there only to enhance and make the story more enjoyable.2) MC's Harem will be big and by the end of the story, he will have more than 10+ women.3)They all will have a deep relationship with him, and will be an important part of the storyline.Note: There is no poison like NTR i or Yuri in the story. But it will have netori and MC will have a few one night stands too because not everyone he has s*x will become his women.But, Let me say this again, this is a story based novel, so expect the number of smut chapters to be low (at least lower than my Lust System book?) Updates will be stable, 7-14 chapter/week.Now, if you have any other questions, feel free to ask below. I'll try to answer all of them.
1st 30 chapters story is boring afterwards. Story is interesting, Nice Story I liked it. But Author can edit more like plot, new places. Story is running in only one place, so it's not interested
The plot is still peak as ever, and the narration improved by a ton! bro is actually starting his villain arc today
my man leveled up after the incident ????
An intriguing tale that has plenty of humor but is a little lacking in describing certain characters.
This story is simply... author is him ??No harem? Good, well-balanced power system? Excellent, but the mystery is beyond that, sheesh. I liked the character development, there's more to see yet, I liked Logan, the mad researcher too, But not many Kang Woo moments are shown, where is Kang Woo ??10/10