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This novel is a rare jade among the trash on this site. And it's actually quite funny! The MC is powerful and he's kinda having fun. I really hope that it gets picked
I really enjoyed the beginning chapters. i normally don’t enjoy systems but it definitely sounds good so far. I hope you focus more on the world building. And you did good at conveying emotions
The story is very interesting. Early on everything is black-and-white clear-cut but as the story progresses things get Blurred and it’s cool too see how the MC Interacts with the Characters
Amazing story. The most unique thing about this story is that it is written by a Pakistani and written in Pakistani style. Good luck author in writing more novels in future
TL;DR: This novel is like having a steak dinner after only eating hamburger helper for months.
First off, the writing itself is on point. Just talking about grammar, punctuation, and spelling, it reads like someone actually proofread the chapters, and there aren't noticeable errors that distract from reading! Many available webnovels seem to suffer from a lack of proofreading, but this one doesn't. Even if this author doesn't actually proofread.
In addition, the author's voice and varied vocabulary ensure good sentence variety and proper flow in each chapter all the way to the end, upon which one realizes they've read a lot, but still want to keep going. Once again, good flow is often hard to find in webnovels, so this one is a breath of fresh air. Or rather, a bite of sirloin steak.
Plus, the characters have tangible character development--the big brain imp from the first 100 chapters is very different than the one now. Not just in power and figure, but also in what he values and how he reacts to events now.
Ok I'm tired of writing now--it's a good book, story good, characters good, author good, I def dont regret spending 3 days reading all the way through. Though my wallet hurts a bit, I'd do it again.
Hi guys,I really appreciate the fantasy world the author has created...you really refine the finer details about the world you are talking about and it's pretty easily picturised in my mind...hope you keep us posted with more chapters...it's a good book to chill with..?
Nice story line and the author really has variety of ideas to share to the reading public. The author creativity and ways of telling the story enhances readers interest to read on and on. Very excellent author.
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A mixed of VRMMO Series with Monster who levels up.. but with a little troupe.. Great for now and it has a very intresting.. Hope it gets picked