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why do you even need fast pass what do they do almost every original book need fast pass after like 30-40 chapters not to mention 6 so what do you need them for

Do yourself a favour and don't read this.  you'll get a headache , extreme cringe and lazy writing.Author is like a parrot or broken record repeating sentences nth number of times.

Another trash.Mc is a lazy a** bum which is very triggering to read.I don't recommend read this. It will make your head hurt while reading it.Plus the amount of inconsistencies is intolerable.

I am just going to say, what you need to improve. First of all, remove the stars from the word, it will not make the word bold, it makes the writing gibberish.Second you need to adjust the word length of a chapter 1500-2000.Third, the story is good, but you need to change the MC name. Or in the future, many people will troll you.Because the name you are using, it needs to be overpowered.

I love this novel. The story progresses is very well. I hope that the relationship between the hero and heroine will improve..........................