JBFIRE_77
This is a really exciting story. Plot twist can be enhanced though. Quite exciting characters... A must read for everyone. Kudos to the author.
This novel is very wonderful, I advise you to read it ??
Hi everyone! Thank you so much for your support! ? I’ll continue to update two chapters a day as usual. But, if we hit new milestones in votes or collections, I’ll release a bonus chapter as a thank you! ?Let’s keep the story growing together! ?
The amount of depth given to the main character feels like first hand experiences of a time traveling phenomenon. As he struggles with his own struggles, he constantly reminds himself the future isn’t necessarily predetermined. The character growth feels natural and I look forward to more. Recommend others give this one a read.
I like the story so far. Great job mr. author.The only thing I don’t like is the MC character being inconsistent. Sometimes he is determined and acts like a normal grownup, sometimes he acts like a child being dragged by the nose by others.
What a name.
"Hey guys, I know the answer of number 1," shouted my friend, which was in rank 1.
"Lucky duck. Anyway, I'm going to head to the Library how about you? Coming with me?"
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(Alison) -uhh No Who Are You even-
Hey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play
When they returned, Joe put on a movie and they settled down to watch. At 10 o'clock, she sent the two of them to bed, quietly so as not to wake up Kassie. "Night Mom!" See you in the morning they whispered as the headed up the stairs. "Night." She called back.
