Shameless author review here! I've finally decided to expand my readerbase to here on Webnovel. Not gonna lie, the interface here is confusing. Anyway, I hope you enjoy reading this story of mine and do comment, like, and support me on this journey. I only accept constructive criticisms by the way.Thanks for giving this a try!
Love characters awaiting their kids grow up Together they family are so lovely ?
I saw a lot of reviews mentioning how submissive the protag is but I wanted to give the story a fair shot. But I’m at chapter 55 and it’s just getting worse it doesn’t even feel like he has any atvantages from his cheats. They still just equal to his sister who has no cheats and is only a year older than him. They feel more like master servant than a real family.
"Didn't I already mention it earlier? Yes! Creating! We will create someone who is strong in the human world.
In the hallway i see a man sitting on living room and he smiled at me.
"Why did I kill him?"
"Oh Ifritz desu," respond my friend.
Cale is a relatable and likable protagonist, and his character development is a highlight of the novel. His growth from a weak character to a stronger one is believable and well-executed, and his relationships with his friends and family are well-developed and nuanced. The supporting cast is also well-written, with memorable characters that add depth and complexity to the story.
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Hey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play
My world's on fire, how about yours?
You'll never shine if you don't glow