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Author.. my biggest question is how long until the MC makes a move on anyone? The theme is “living for my desires”. Im not wanting to waste my time reading and paying for chapters for the MC to stay a virgin.
Impressive book, the system is interesting and quite easy to follow. Already in my library ?
Just notice it got updated today hope the author continues to be honest. Also going to reread this again when i have time, i literally forgot everything in the story also hope the mc make the female lead's and her relationship official (since i kinda remembered that the she only considers theirselves as "friends")
Totally hooked on this book. I wish we could get more chapters. Looking forward to more.
interesting, I'm hooked !I added it to my librarykeep writing
This book is very unique and interesting ??,I love it❤️❤️.The way the writer uses word play is very wonderful. The combination of mythology and normal life is what got me tripping over this book.The book makes me forget about all my worries, it's just like I'm teleported into the book world and I'm experiencing it first hand I love it ❤️
Hi readers, this is EternalSaga. This is my first fantasy novel on Webnovel, and I hope it leaves a lasting impression on you. Please feel free to leave your feedback and suggestions. I’d be happy to hear them.Thank you, and enjoy reading!
It's really good stuff just too early to enjoy the full story.
I'm so glad you wrote another book hopefully we have a strong female lead just like our dear rose and happy ending as well and with the people that cross gets their payback as little
Was hooked from his previous novel and now i was immediately hooked after a couple chapters, very well thought out with detailing and epicness
The writing quality is actually pretty high in this book, cant say much about world building as it just started but. It seems promising. Now a few tips that i think could help are that, you probably shouldnt add any type of romance. With it not really making sense as the Mc is another species. And dont add a female Paragon as it will just feel forced andruin the story. Also dont make the protagonist a hero or antihero that tries to save the world. Because i feel like its getting over used and wouldnt match the Mc personality. Now he dosent have to be a villain either. He could just be willing to do what it takes for his goal.But overall i like where the story is going.??
