TheUrbanKing
Honestly I just got hooked from the very first chapter I love everything about it highly recommend
thought it was a typical cn novel turned out to be a real gem the mc rarely uses his cheat but it doesn't look forced... overall fantastic read??
It’s new but I’m liking it already, I hope it gets better
Okay, this is fun enough, and even though the MC hasn't shown itself yet, but there's something interesting about it, I suggest you read it.Down with the righteous rotten stuff, and here you need an MC who will arrange oceans of blood and mountains of corpses, just like that...
Wow!! Wow!! Blown away by the first chapters and even more so the dramatic twist and am hooked. Thank you, Author and welcome back. I look forward to enjoying this masterpiece. Cheers.
Shameless review from your author. ? I am actually quite nervous about releasing this book because of my very long medical break. However, the story of this book is something that hits home, if you know what I mean. I hope you will all love it. ?
Great world building; good detail of land, setting, and characters; typos so far are very rare; understandable if author needs a break given how frequently they update the book (they’ve bounced between 6 to 8 chapters per week and I don’t think they have stopped yet); often avoids certain text that the computer will read aloud like “-“ is “dash”; very focused on the story with some character background and comedy here and there10/10 good, chill read
this is what I like about new gen writers they don't make their mc's look like pitfull ones , either they are smart or they are hardworking, and all of this space world building fascinates me , writer keep making good chapters , the later ones are a delight to read.
First of all, I want to give a round of applause to such great work?? I love how the female lead was portrayed...really helpful on my own work
Looks promising... I think the author rushed a bit because most of the chapters were fast-paced without going into the necessary details and the dialogue was a bit stiff.
It good needs a little work i liked the romance you tried to create it is good work hard and i will be here to give you props and keep up the hard work
Quick update: Thanks to the few people that read it! I'm working to get a chapter 2 ASAP, but I really do appreciate feedback and definitely need it!
