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Atara Korrell, a retired Navy captain, is called back into service after a gifted scientist loses everything.

Is she serving her country? Or is she just a pawn in a great game?

Orivar is a web novel series set in the distant future. Humanity has all but mastered the exotic material known as omnium, the most common of which is called orivar: the original variety. That clear crystal is a transmuter of mass and energy, and the very existence of contemporary Civilized Space depends on it.

Deep Black, the first book in the series, begins a classic story of light versus darkness. A novel variety of omnium–one with the potential of sending Civilized Space crashing down–is stolen from a research station just beyond the Federation border. Atara Korrell, a retired Navy captain, is called to command the fastest starship ever made to chase the thieves and retrieve the stolen sample. Meanwhile, enemies both near and far vie for the omnium sample and the advanced technology powering her ship. Can Atara remain loyal in the face of seeming betrayal?(Cover art by Loputon https://www.deviantart.com/loputon)

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Just read all the chapters in one go and damn I am excited for more
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I have never before read a story that made rich and ex-rich people seem so real and so thoroughly human. The level of realism in the story is exquisite and I love how the author treats the characters while revealing their important personality traits through action and not merely through telling. I think here is an exquisitely well crafted ratio of show and tell, and this got me wondering if there is more to this genre than I realized. All in all, an enjoyable read, 5/5, plenty of fun plot twists and everything else that readers will surely enjoy. I wish the author good luck.
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You just need a bit of work on grammar , but other than that it's really good. It gets more and more interesting ! Keep it up author. Btw I'm not done with it yet but I'm far enough into it to leave a review.
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OH...MY...GOD!!! Being a sci-fi reader a heart, I definitely approve of this. It's original, it sucks you in right from the start, and the plot is very well done! Sci-fi/alien/superhero readers, you need to read this!
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Don’t get me wrong. It’s a good story. It’s just that is awfully similar to Novels Extra, that I started to suspect a copy with slight alterations and confirmed my thoughts when a character by the name of “Kim Suho” made an appearance in chapter 24ish. If you haven’t read novels extra you wouldn’t notice but if you have it’s easy to tell that all the major plot lines align. Like choosing a dagger whereas in novels extra it’s a gun. But the reasoning behind their choices and how others view it being the exact same. The first villainThe characters, etc. It’s all the same. I’ll continue reading a bit and see but will drop if it continues tk be jsut a copy with changed names and genders
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