Orivar: Deep Black - Reviews

Just read all the chapters in one go and damn I am excited for more

I have never before read a story that made rich and ex-rich people seem so real and so thoroughly human. The level of realism in the story is exquisite and I love how the author treats the characters while revealing their important personality traits through action and not merely through telling. I think here is an exquisitely well crafted ratio of show and tell, and this got me wondering if there is more to this genre than I realized. All in all, an enjoyable read, 5/5, plenty of fun plot twists and everything else that readers will surely enjoy. I wish the author good luck.

You just need a bit of work on grammar , but other than that it's really good. It gets more and more interesting ! Keep it up author. Btw I'm not done with it yet but I'm far enough into it to leave a review.

OH...MY...GOD!!! Being a sci-fi reader a heart, I definitely approve of this. It's original, it sucks you in right from the start, and the plot is very well done! Sci-fi/alien/superhero readers, you need to read this!

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Don’t get me wrong. It’s a good story. It’s just that is awfully similar to Novels Extra, that I started to suspect a copy with slight alterations and confirmed my thoughts when a character by the name of “Kim Suho” made an appearance in chapter 24ish. If you haven’t read novels extra you wouldn’t notice but if you have it’s easy to tell that all the major plot lines align. Like choosing a dagger whereas in novels extra it’s a gun. But the reasoning behind their choices and how others view it being the exact same. The first villainThe characters, etc. It’s all the same. I’ll continue reading a bit and see but will drop if it continues tk be jsut a copy with changed names and genders

'BANG' A tiny green orb entered its chest at a high speed.

"Even with the Black Tome, you gave me previously. Its power is off the charts with it being a guide to the power cycles of ancient emperors even if I casually practiced anyone of those cultivation methods it would be hard for me to find an opponent. Yet you still come here to give me an even more powerful cultivation method. One that you personally practice. What is your goal?" Jason was a suspicious person from the start and this old man simply kept on gifting things to him that normal people would kill for. He had no contact with people that had cultivation methods like these but he could guess that they were only for direct descendants or people who have sworn themselves to them. The only vampires he had ever met were Michael and Ashley and all they were using were the most basic of cultivation methods to develop their strength. It was clear to him that people weren't simply giving out cultivation methods. So this old man must want something. Its gotta be a huge favour that requires a lot of strength. Considering how he gave me the black tome first but came back presumably he thought that the strength the tome provided wasn't enough to complete the task so decided to give me the Blood Legacy that he wields.

When he hears the word "job," Jack couldn't help but look away.

The library laughs heartily as he says "While it is true that it can give you experience and that it can give you skills, but it is one of the least efficient ways to gain strength and the requirements to activate a note is extremely high and the people who can use it will most likely no longer have use of it, or even be completely unable to use it in general."

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