so far, very strong development in character and storyline ?
Henry BIMBO is an author that captures people's attention via strong emotional connection, that leaves the ready wanting more and more. The author describes a sad beginning but joyous ending for a young man that was lost but now knows what love is, because he was abandoned at a young age by his mother.Everybody deserves a second chance especially a second chance of being part of a family and being loved.
Quite Greattttt writingggggg!can't wait to read more
well the novel is good and is different from other novel you see everywhere but there is one thing I want to ask is for the author to please explain the mc appearance it say that MC is forty years old but does not tell us any about him if he look like normal forty years old man or less I just want to understand I have being reading novel from chapter 1-60 but does not even know the mc appearance and as for the harem tag from the look of things maybe when the novel end is there the romances would start.
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The lore of this book interests me, it has a lot of potential, it reminds me of Dant's Inferno
El autor es tonto o que?, Se supone que el MC se quiere volver fuerte rápido para no sufrir peligro ni debilidad, pero no mata bestias fuertes para no subir de nivel, hay que tener consistencia en lo que se dice. Un libro así pierde el sentido y ya no es tan interesante.
Although I can't say much about it because only the first 7 chapters have been released so far and not much about the book can be reviewed so far, my rating is a clear 5 star.The book gives me a feeling that makes me want to continue to read. This is guaranteed 100% better than 99% of the other reincarnated as a dragon or something similar, if you like something similar to that. I recommend it to you, and rightfully claim my spot as third reviewer XD
???Well im support myself , well any way i want to look at people opinions but its seem its hard to make people read it but any way im develop myself by time i guess as later chapters the quality becomes better, i hope you enjoy it and you can comment i will answer every single one , feel free this my first novel,
first .. you need tags, Second is getting a code cover... and fourth, start by adding your book to your lib... I'll be back for a better review when you work on this along with your writing skills .. see ya omfie
Now this is a very interesting litrpg mainly because of good writing quality and a mc that is evil like our Lord and Saviour Great Love?
It's a really good novel, if anything should be said about it is, It's really well written, has a good, and more importantly, continous development. it doesn't falter, and stuff happens and gets done. however, as there are few chapters where characters interact with each other, there is a lack of knowledge we as readers have about them. but it will solve itself in the next few chapters, I believe. the same goes with the world background, although you can tell it's almost the same world as where we live. In the beginning, there is some stuff hinting that this world has a supernatural/magical/fantastical side to it, but it just hasn't appeared yet. this makes the novel lack its own unique approach. although it isn't bad to (sometimes) not have a unique approach, I feel that this novel could benefit very much from it.maybe make it so that some specific people can use magic, and there are the typical magical races, but they are hidden in the Amazon Jungle, or they are in a deep slumber waiting for the so called "awakening of spiritual energy". there are many more things that can be done.author, you can freely use my ideas if you want, I can also give you more if you need/want. just comment under any of my comments or even under this review. you can also contact me in Discord @NaruSenku. I'm always willing give a helping hand to authors.