Até o momento, capítulo 9:Qualidade de escrita 5Estabilidade de atualização 5Desenvolvimento da história 4Design de personagem 4Fundo de mundo 3
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If you’re just reading the plot, you can skim the chapters and possibly enjoy. If you’re looking for a semi-intelligent mc, this is not for you. If you’re looking for original characters, this is not for you. If you’re looking for immersion, this is not for you. The mc will plan out what he’s going to do, then act surprised when it actually happens. The higher beings are generally stereotypical bad guys, callously looking at mortals as possessions (which is already found in a myriad of xianxia so not something that affected my rating)The amount of breaking-the-wall that happens takes you out of the story, and loses any seriousness it may have had. (Personally not a fan)In summary, a lot of aspects, especially character creation, are subpar. However the plot has its merits and could later progress into something quite significant.