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Still waiting for the author to announce why roy has the program and why he is obsessed with killing that person.There are a bit too many characters and complicated relationships, and I often struggled to remember the names of various fictional characters to keep going. Need to go back and read it all over again.
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Firstly, the concept of the novel seems intriguing and full of potential. The idea of exploring a world where humans have evolved due to a catastrophic event and the juxtaposition of advanced technology and human greed is a captivating premise that could attract readers.Secondly, the main character's journey of self-discovery and redemption through his second chance at life could make for a compelling story. The mystery surrounding his return and the world he finds himself in creates an engaging plot that could keep readers hooked.Finally, my advice would be to focus on creating well-developed characters and an immersive setting that transports readers to this futuristic world. Consider exploring themes of human nature, morality, and the consequences of our actions, which could add depth and meaning to the story.Overall, keep writing and exploring the possibilities of this unique and exciting world you have created. ?
Sadly the characters seam very one-dimensional and it doesn’t help that the author decided to make the mc so op (tens of times the power of other people at the same realm) that long-lasting allies are simply impossible because he can do everything by himself way better.
I gotta say this novel got me hooked..as a man of culture, i really appreciate this piece of gem. It has all kind of fantasy you ever dream of. The MC is caring for his disciple/lover is a plus for me. Some say this has NTR? No, totally wrong..i've read this from the beginning.
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The absolute best novel i have read among the current trial read, except for custom made demon king. It is on par with the library of heaven's path and cultivation chat group in terms of comedy and trolling.
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I'm greatly enjoying what the first opening chapters have brought. The investment for the characters haven't peeked yet for me, as is, I do look forward on that changing. Same for world build. Overall, this has been a neat look and I can't wait to come back for more.
A unique concept.... For me cos i rarely see a book with this concept. A robot with a few flesh and blood? Cool! Lake made entirely of beers? Just imagining that makes me drunk!
It is a good story and i really liked how story is developing . I highly recommend u guys to read it once or just give a try to this story For me i liked this story and ofc the all characters and character development
