I’m in love with how this story is going so far I can’t wait for future updates ????
The constant mix of present tense and past tense is reallly realllllly annoying. And after reading like 4 chaps, I still don't know if you intended to write things in present tense or past tense. Other than that, there's not much to badmouth regarding grammar. As for WOrld and character design, they're very very interesting. Everything's explained in a quick, no-nonsense manner, and you can see the characters' personalities oozing out from the pages.Some passages read in a bit of an exaggerated manner to emphasize plot points and character traits, but it's nothing too overbearing.As for story dev, I rly can't say much at this point in the novel
very good, i'm really enjoying the characters, i think there will be a lot to explain in the future, both about the MC's friends and the other guild members, keep up the great work
read it MC is super beta scared of everyting if he don't outlevel enemy by 10 times he will run away STAY AWAY MC BETA STAY AWAY MC BETA STAY AWAY MC BETA STAY AWAY MC BETA STAY AWAY MC BETA STAY AWAY MC BETA STAY AWAY MC BETA STAY AWAY MC BETA STAY AWAY MC BETA STAY AWAY MC BETA STAY AWAY MC BETA
Amazing. This is great. Not many chapters, but I can already see the potential in this book. Can't wait for more chapters as Mian climbs up the ranks!
k how do I say it?? I don't comment or review mostly but now I felt like I should just do itmyou have a good writing style author I like the way you write fights. clearly only few characters are introduced till now it makes easy for me to not get confused.
Shameless author promoting my work.If you can get past my not so perfect English, and the fact that is the first time writing a novel, I hope you'll enjoy the world I'm creating born from countless nights without sleep ahah...Love to y'all
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
First I would like to tell that I'm not good at English so please bear my review. I've been looking for something new where a main character is transported to another world then do kingdom building. This hits right off the mark, the writing quality if great I think, I don't know how to judge it but it's great since I understand it clearly without making myself awkward while reading it. The story development, hmm since it's only 12 chapters I think it is going steady and not that a fast paced. I'm looking forward when the mc is crowned as an Emperor and have a wife because an emperor must have a queen to rule right? Character design, well I like Thomas Harrier, he is a rational and intellectual person but that personality was affected by Alexander de Romanoff, a body which he is currently possessing, a playboy and loves to fool around according to the description. He is loved by his emotional beautiful silver-haired sisters and Alexander also loves them. So whenever a emotional scene appears, Thomas is conflicted with emotion because he is acting like he is not used to before thanks to the influence of Alexander affecting him in a subconscious level. Well I don't know if the prince he's alive or not. As for Thomas Harrier's intellect, I'm looking forward of him inventing modern technologies. Since he is reincarnated in a world similar to the early twentieth century, I believe it's feasible to create computers like you know skip the vacuum tubes and build transistors for computers, build modern battleships with sonars and radars, build main battle tanks akin to the 1950s or 1960s, 1950s cars, electric appliances to further his economy. Oh, didn't I tell you that Thomas Harrier has a grasp of knowledge in medicine? I won't spoil much but in the early chapters, our main character is synthesizing a streptomycin, a cure for tuberculosis to save his little sister who is afflicted with the disease. So I am looking forward for him to modernize medicine and invent medical equipment as well and win Nobel prize for medicine or physiology. This is just me giving you ideas author~sama.After reading the last chapter, I feel that our mc will transition the Empire into a constitutional monarchy because of the pressure of the people. You better listen to your people if you don't want them to revolt against you. I don't know if this is considered a smart move or not but I will say anyway, listening to your people is a best way to revitalize your country as their the driving force of your economy, without people there is no nation. The antagonist of the story is not yet fleshed out, probably because is in it's early chapters so I don't expect much from them for now but please don't forget about them. I'm looking forward for our villain here. Based on the story, our mc is the prince of Ruthenia Empire, which is based off the Russian Empire. An empire with a lot of population, lands, mineral reserves, oil reserves, golds, diamonds and has a potential to be a world superpower if not only for the predecessor of Alexander Romanoff who misgoverned the country, leading it to its economic downfall leading to workers strikes, protest, and civil unrest. The stability of updates is great, two chapters a day is enough for meThis is the first novel I've read where the setting is not in Germany, so it's refreshing. Enough with the German science is the best in the world, in this story, it will be the Ruthenia's science. I hope this novel won't get cancelled just because it is similar to Russian Empire. Because we all know the ongoing conflict with Russia and Ukraine. That's all have a good day author and may the god bless you ideas to further this novel. Long live the Emperor, long live Ruthenia! .
Author are you ever going to continue writing chapters for the Magical System also The guardian system Trader. .............................
Nice read so far. The writing quality is good, the world background and power system seems pretty solid also, the only shortcoming I think is the problem of the system reveal. I'm gonna believe the author though, I believe that the reveal will be epic, I recommend this guys. Also, please don't drop the book author.
A rare plot with a superb world building, reminds me of Sakura Card Captor I watched during my childhood. Although, I'm not into male leads stories, I am actually interested in this book because of its quality, the vivid image of the world that the author has created has helped me imagine it with ease. The Ahli character is very likeable as well. Will definitely read further on.