make more work on it, u need to show us some details
like everything so far, the world background is very interesting and a little unique and the power system that we are exposed to at this point, 20 chapters, is also interesting. The MC at this point seems to be a normal intelligent character. lastly if you are expecting much adult content, their will probably not be much for at least another 30 chapters or so as our mc is still only 5 at this point.
Before volume 2 starts I would want to thank all my current readers although yall not a lot.I hope I can continue improving my work as time goes on. Volume 2 is another calmer volume, there won't be a lot of the action seen in the later volumes but nonetheless I hope I could provide the best writing possible for everyone. If you do want to support me, please do it on royal road, the novel is under the same name. I do not plan to sign with webnovel as they take away my copyright.
An interesting idea, and a strange plot so far. I think the paragraphs need short sentences and one can use the word (one) instead of he/she. Maybe you can add a bit of emotion to the characters in their time of crisis or when making hard choices. But so far, it's great on the science side, just try to put it in shorter sentences so the concept becomes clearer for your everyday readers. Go on!???
Haven’t read the original, but I’m loving this novel. All in all worth the read.
WOW !! An interesting synopsis you got there. From the way it looks , this is gonna be a hit in the story industry. I cannot wait for more chapter updates.
Honestly, I'm obsessed with this story . It's not everyday that you see a relatable story. If you can relate to one-sided love, you should read this .
It's not amazing; it has its flaws but also potential. I like the theme of vampires and supernatural creatures, although there aren't many stories in this theme that I enjoy. I'll give it a chance, even though the writing is a bit weak. I hope the updates are at least regular. The point-of-view issue bothers me a little, but I don't think it's a big problem.
The story follows Elias, a survivor hardened by a decade of life in a zombie apocalypse. Just as death seems inevitable, he awakens in an alternate world that's equally harsh and unforgiving. In this new realm, Elias discovers an enigmatic system that grants him extraordinary abilities and dangerous quests.Harnessing the power to control the dead, Elias transforms from prey to predator, building an army of the fallen under his command. However, he soon realizes he’s merely a pawn in a cosmic game orchestrated by unfathomable entities. Determined to break free from their grip, Elias embarks on a perilous journey, facing monumental challenges while confronting the haunting shadows of his past.For fans of fantasy, and protagonists who walk the line between hero and anti-hero, Pawn of the Gods is an enthralling and unforgettable read.
I think this book has a lot of potential. I’d like to see the author put a little more time into forging and adding an additional level of detail to the games. Calling the beast “a moth” or “a mouse” just seems a bit lazy, add some nouns like a “Temporal Void Moth” or “Meta Time Mouse”. Also the stories progression seems a bit off, went from not being able to fight iron rats to fighting a dragon godmod death in like 20 chapters, something like that should happen over 200 chapters. Same with the whole family confrontation, came a bit too early in the story.
story is very engaging, he spent some time developing the character an establishing the different relationships. pacing is fine, I don't fell like he spent too much time in any particular area. this author has another story that is very much on par with this one and was the reason I discovered this story. it's definitely worth a read. now my only concern is how often the chapters are uploaded.
thanks for the amazing book , also do you think you can make a miraculous ladybug book , we're the mc has the ability to transmute matter or the ability to craft items or weapons , like a sword that controls lighting or a spear that controls fire or a shield that controls wind .