The God Universe System

This was amazing to read and is a very interesting spin on the naruto series, that being said the translation is abhorrent and is pretty much unreadable, its a massive shame

I just hope it stays true to its slice of life tag ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ

Very fun to read. It's been the best novel on this site for me ???????????????????????????????????????

1- writing quality: I’ve read the twelve chapters that are out so far and found only a few mistakes. The writing style didn’t exactly do much to hold my attention, but it’s fine. How ever the system prompts are very annoying, reading all of them could take some time.2-update stability: Ive read the first twelve chapters in a day or to so I don’t know how often author updates.3-story development: in the twelve chapters I’ve read the story hasn’t gotten the chance to develop very far, but its a good start.4-character design: all of the characters are based on sea creatures. only two of the characters have a defined personality, them being MC and his only friend/side kick5-world background: I can’t say much on the world background. however, I like the setting.

I like the concept, but the story progression is not really that addictive. I have lost my interest in reading it after only tens of chapters. I believe the character's personalities and world building could be worked on a bit more.

Hmm.. interesting ?? ....................