Another review after 2 weeks to help the author. the release rate has been consistent and the story progress at fast pace.
everyone who likes this book should also read villain retirement. i think both books are very good. if you don't have anything left to read then you should read villain retirement. it's incredibly good
hahaha, I would be rating my own book. this my break through book, like it's performing better than all the other books I have wrote, thanks for those who have been supportive since day one. Writing Quality, Superb! I'm very good in English! Story Development -Oh yeah! This so me!!Character Design -Im working on that, if you read the first five chapters you must know what kind of a person Ivy is!Updating Stability??? ---More than stable!!!!! Ten Chapters a week? Yes that sound like me!World background???? I even drew a map of the Heather Lands you can come check it on my Instagram dm @jae_05vy!!!
It's an amazing story with an exciting plot. Read the story of a girl who was reborn and lives her life again. Hope you people will like the story
Like the novel. What I like is MC isn't either a stupid or a forgiving guy. He is strong, he schemes and also has a strong background. The only thing that it lacks as of now is a strong villain to give him problems.But, only 36 chapters have passed. So, we'll have to see... A Villain who might be the final boss is already introduced in the early chapters, who is a standard guy with poor background, sick grandma, a beautiful sister, and gf with heaven-defying luck and equipment. We'll have to see when they get to meet.It's more like a rise of a Good Villain to take revenge against a hero. I can see it has a high potential, at least on the story-wise.
What can I say.... I had a good time with your novel ;) Something completely different from the novels on that app.Interesting plot and characters. I really like Alex.I am waiting for more.
This week's trial reads are super strange... forging the path, your talent is mine, and super beast tamer all only have 61 chapters in the raw ... with basically no one in china reading them. All of them haven't been updated since 2020-12-03 as well. Strangehttps://book.qidian.com/info/1024631207 -> forging
The world setting is modern times where a game is played. Random living creatures are selected to become players.The game started 7 months ago when the mc became a player by killing another player (cat)The game consists of three modes, routine quest (Basically daily quests where you can accept or reject without any penalties - randomly given)Scripted quests (Die or do quests, once started, you need to complete it or you will die)And an another one that I can't remember.. Hahha, sorry.It can be multiplayer (With multiple people - random) or alone.MC is very knowledgable and is a wild genius that can build his own weaponary and equipment.The character design is nice, you can definitely see the difference of personalities.Translation Quality: 5 stars - like most novels, totally readable.SoU: 5 star - trial readStory development: 5 stars - concept is niceCharacter design: 5 stars - already explainedWorld Background: 5 stars - already explained.-(53 chapters read - Im broke, no fast passess)
Reviewing my own work xD But I sure do hope you will enjoy reading it as much as I did writing it ^^ This book is very precious to me. Have fun and don't hesitate to give feedback! I'm always happy to read comments, reviews, and of course, criticism! <3