nice work keep going I'll just reviewing it
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Way too unrealistic for any ottoman ah, the empire isnt turkish republic where its small enough and linked to europe for Ataturks reforms to work, here the middle east is included with its majority muslim and devout population, the whole thing is a powder keg that wont bend to the tanzimat without fully revolting or losing control, by modernizing with no consideration to the devout in your most prosperous potential lands you jeopardize any future to those lands in the empire.Should have included the Ottomans as protectors of the faith to bring the arabs into the fold or they will inevitably revolt after feeling disenfranchised and alienated. This method of reforms is however perfect for a smaller empire which is modern turkey+balkans without the lands of arabia
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Hey everyone! Author here. I'm just going to say that if you are a fan of fast-paced simulation novels then you're going to love the story. If you are, please try it and give me your honest thoughts, only with your active support could the story get better and better! ?
nice characters and story plots are also good
filled with romance and thrill... truly recommended
typical reincarnation and fantasy novel , story line seems interesting worth the try.
Great story to follow. updating being the only issue
The dialogue in this section is genuinely excellent and I want to talk about why. First, let's address the elephant in the room: Xia Miao's lying is so bad it's comedic. "Don't get the wrong idea, though. Me saying I'd hurt doesn't mean I'm head-over-heels in love with you right now, you know. I still only like you a tiny bit!" Bro. You just admitted you'd be hurt if he got sick. You were literally scolding him to eat. Your actions are screaming love and your words are whispering "it's fine, I don't care." The dissonance is delicious. Lu Yan's dialogue is equally good because it's so sparse and raw. He barely speaks but when he does, it means something. "I... I don't know either." "Can I kiss you?" "That's it." "I'll make sure Miaomiao likes me a whole lot more." Short sentences. Stuttering. He doesn't have the words for what he feels, so he just... says what he can. Lin Gaoshan's voice is distinct too — he's calculating, manipulative, always trying to negotiate. "We're both smart people here, so let's drop the act." "If we can manage to capture a monster together and smuggle it out of here, the people at SU will reward us with a fortune we could never spend in a lifetime." He's performing confidence while clearly panicking inside. And that moment when he slips and says "The suppressor is right inside the school cafeteria kit" before catching himself? Chef's kiss. You can literally see him realize he just handed her all the information. Xia Miao's response to all of this? Cool as ice. "I don't do business with liars." Not a hint of fear. She's playing him the entire time and she knows it. The dialogue between Fang Ke'ai and Xia Miao is also worth noting — it's light, almost casual, which makes the tonal shift into the storage room even more jarring. One minute they're discussing boys and snacks, the next it's life or death.
This is really a good novel. I like everything: good story plot, characters and their potential development. I am looking forward for more updates. Also, I will definitely recommend to everyone to read this novel.
A very good book I enjoyed every part of it