Nightgloom and Gailbreeze

I like this

this novel had an alright premise but it is completely ruined by the incompetency of the author by making the story seem like it was written by a 5 year old

Overall its good the story developed in a good way but the way he train is just insane and it feelLike he would be a pro already but I know that its a fantasy ich novel  so it just bugging me and I dont mind it that much. I know people commented on the grammar but it really suck and I knew it is hard to write english too cuz English my second language. Like I get the overall sentence and stuff cuz I read google translation chinese novel. It just need a bit of editing sentence strcuture and it will be good, so if you trust me I would like to edit your work for you.

Well, no raw link means that this won't get picked.... Sucks since it's one of the better ones.                                                                                                                             

bro its good.??i thought cultivation genre was finished but boy was i wrong. i thought cultivation was repetitive, cliche and harem,etc..and as i was bored i tried it with no hope but boy was i wrong try it u will not regret it

pretty good in my opinion the pacing is good the character-building is quite good I'm not sure if he's overpowered but if you like the type of story upper story this is basically it