okay this ay sound wierd but i'm rating this again, i'm really amazed by how this is turning out to be, it's getting interesting every chapter and i think this will only get better as the romance unfolds
This book is good fr (im not the author at all)If you got suggestions or a advice for a SCP or for the overall book. You can say it here
After reading my vampire system, I wish there was another system novel that I can read, then I saw this story, at first I didn't like it, but gradually, I find myself loving this story
Hello readers, author here. This is the new link for this book. Chapter schedule is the same as before.
**Review up to chapter 290**Is the novel worth it? It definitely is, it has high quality ‘Plot’ combined with many interesting characters that tickle all the kinks… The power system is quite fun and I like how it somehow blends perfectly into a modern fantasy world without breaking the feel of it(‘ A dude that’s committed to building his harem by just cruising thru life’). You won’t get bored reading and another huge plus for me is that it looks we are in for the long run.**SPOILER, maybe?**I do have some advice to elevate the novel before it goes to the point of no return… I feel that with the last ~70 chapters the novel derailed a bit from the actual plot compared to the beginning. It’s sort of heading into short ‘stories’ around 1 heroine at a time instead of that seamless flow of events that it had, not like it’s a bad thing since there are many heroines to address(rather I liked it very much… cough) but to keep things fresh and entertaining a proper timeline of events is better. It would make the novel move at a slower pace but I think it’s necessary so that some heroines won’t be left out. Ultimately my advice is to pace the plot better and not rush things too much, I’m not talking about the events around the heroines but more like the events in between.***Anyways, good job Author! I’m excited for what’s to comeThe novel is definitely a hidden gem ✅ 9/10
The potion has a shiny gold color and shines like all other potion.
machine.
And suddenly the blue color of the potion of kindnesd turned into a dark purple.
"Okay, what if we name it ...."
"What?" asked again me.
*WARNING THIS CHAPTER IS 21+PLEASE DO NOT READ THIS STORY IF YOU FEEL UNCOMFORTABLE*
"If you say so..." Gohan knew there was something more to this and that Issei wasn't telling the complete truth. He had seen many peoples faces when they lied or just tried to brush off a similar question and judging the way Issei replied something was plaguing the boy,hmm wonder what's up with him…Soon enough everyone had finished their breakfasts and were ready to leave for school.