LordofEndless
Chapters read: 42I thought mixing mage concepts with cultivation was interesting, but things got a bit confusing to me. I did feel the antagonization of the MC was a bit forced with some of the characters. There didn't seem to be any background information as to what MC possibly did to them to merit that hatred lol aside from Raiden, the hatred of others seems a little out of place. That's just what I think, but I know someone can hate you for no reason too. So perhaps it's reasonable?? I thought the story was okay, neither great nor terrible.
Nice story can’t wait for your next chapters
Good! Better than most of the novels I read here! Keep going and make sure each supporting character gets their shine
The few chapters at the start are quite slow-paced, but after that, the fun of the story begins. Also, I like to applaud the author for using first-person POV in writing the story. It really highlights the MC's personality.
This book is so captivating already and I love the main character can’t wait too see what happens next ???
Interesting storyline. Like how the characters are brought together. However, I am confused regarding Yukon’s gender as has been referred to as she/he/him/her interchangeably throughout the chapters.
looking forward for the family drama that is about to happen
A peak new album by mage- I mean darkcrafter. Can't wait to see how many new albums he cooks and delivers before GTA VI. Keep it up mage- I mean darkcrafter
Score:8/10Wont lie this book probably has the most innovative idea for the ‘Misunderstood Villain’ genre The writing quality is pretty good and the way the story is portrayed is very new. I am sure anyone who reads it will probably have their intrest piqued.The story of the villain being portrayed for the world to see, along with live coments from the audience is a very fun experience. The story tackles very real sentiments, where if someone is considered ‘evil’ then the their whole life is considered a cumulating of ‘evil deeds’.But at the same time ‘transmigration’ was not really needed in the story. It might be useful way far into the story but along the current chapters it is not needed. The supporting cast is also very intresting we have: transmigrator , reincarnated one and returner. Along with normal people. With the main aspect being either they hate the mc or they believe they were betrayed by him. The world is built along the movie. It’s a nice way to give details about the world and its inhabitants.But alas even after all the good points I probably won’t continue reading the book. Its really just a ‘me’ problem, which is I really don’t care about the past. Knowing what’s happening in the present. the past events don’t matter to me. I already know the end point of the story. I already know the big spoiler so I feel less intrested in the story with every chapter.Like sure it’s intresting how much efforts the mc is making to save Huda and Sinbad but I already know Huda reaches her uncle and Sinbad dies. Sure it would be intresting to know how it happned but I can just accept something bad happned and leave it at that. I don’t care about the romance if you already told me who the interests are at the beginning cause I already know what the end result is. Again it would be cool to know the details but I can live with ‘The Fl fell in love with the mc but felt she was betrayed when he broke her trust or killed their loved ones’. I already know they will hate him enough to reach this point, where is chained up, at the edge of death.And after all the story is told, there isn’t much that could happen: either the mc survives or he dies. Yeah sure it’s the journey that matters but you already showed me the ending and then started the journeyAgain as I said it’s probably a ‘me’ problem. I am probably being narrow minded and not seeing the bigger picture. And am probably being under appriciative of the art. I know the story wants me to see the life of a misunderstood hero.But I don’t want to make an effort to understand it. Hope this book finds success though, as I feel it brings something new to the table and is not just some generic copy paste story.
I'm very intrigued in this world so far! military + fantasy is always a fun mix. Author has a very clear image of what his world looks like, which is always a plus!
well l think the book is ok at the beginning you may think that it's not interesting when you reach chapter two to begin to understand ,it nice it needs patience
How can my feelings for this book be summed up hmm... The writing quality isn't the best with minimal errors but some grammars and sentence structure issues that I can't point out of the top of my head.The stability of updates seems good although I have only just finished binging the book, the post times seem good so in my ignorance, I have no complaints yet.Story Development seems decently paced going from training to fighting to harem making in an acceptable way.Character Design is good across the board the main character is entertaining but it's a little off with Victoria where I was expecting a serious mentor character for the author to suddenly turn her into a silly modern girl which whilst not a character I dislike the decision seems a bit abrupt and the lack of male characters except Hill. This is more an issue with how the MC has a likable personality to cowardly males so a character like this would feel right at home.World Background takes a bit of a backseat in this novel but it isn't bad just lacking in places with a lack of explanations for common things to the fantasy genre which isn't a problem for a veteran such as myself but having more explanation would do well by the newer readers even if you have to bore the veterans with the explanations.In conclusion, this was a fine read that played to its strong points but exposing some weak points that are easy to pick at but not personally offputting for me and thus I look forward to future chapters
