I just read the first chapter and it already made me laugh ? The story is in the MC POV and that's new for me, since every cultivation story usually used third POV. Goodluck! After 23rd Nov, maybe I could give you two stones ?
The premise of the story is really good and the world is pretty intersting, but goddamn is the pace horrible. The story starts really strong and is quite enjoyable if a little bit frustrating, but still acceptable. This goes all down the train around ch. 150-200 and it goes downhill... fast... There happens so much shit that doesnt get resolved and when it gets resolved its pretty fast. If that wouldnt be nough before you can even enjoy the momentary victory of the MC it gets all ruined and something happens or someone appears who is just above MC in every way. So yeah if you want to see a MC who CONSTANTLY has to hide run and train for one to two chapters of victory every 100 chapters this is your story!
Hello everyone, author here. ??Please don't mind my 5 star rating.? I just want to encourage you guys to share what you think about this book, where I must improve on and maybe the changes that should be done. I am really new to this and I want to know what other readers feel about my work, whether it's good or bad.You're reviews will be very much appreciated because it will help me in developing the story and my skills as a writer ( if I can be considered one ).Thank youGod bless..?