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Where can I find a man like Wren? Or Lysander? Can I have one of each? This book is sooo good. The way the characters speak feels real, except better. I can't wait to read more.
It's a little of a sign in story but also a money hungry system... Besides that I couldn't even make it to the double digit chapters. The MC made it impossible to continue. The power went straight to his head immediately. His actions and mindset just put me off starting with showing up to a job he hasn't been to in a week and acting like everyone should bow down to him because of his power level that NO ONE KNOWS ABOUT YET!
30+ chapters, im still wondering if these tags are a mistake, no "# WEAKTOSTRONG" no "SYSTEM" no "LEVELUP
This actually looks so amazingly unique. Can't wait to see if it just turns into a stupid vrmmorpg, or if it can cement itself as a really good slice of life type book.
Sometimes you just get the feeling of "Fine, I'll do it myself" and that's what happened here. I know it may not be everyone's cup of tea, but I'd like to think I've come quite far since I first started my journey in writing.I won't say this is the culmination of everything I've learned, but it most definitely is one of the stories I've sunk the most effort into working on so far.Hope you guys enjoy your stay!
I love the book so much please make more
This has a good start until it becomes a reaction novel. No fighting at the start and just focus more on his female companion. MC always describes the smell of a female character. Also, the MC have GF, a fiancee, an angel(item summon), an ice queen(summon), and one other woman living in the same house who confesses that they all like the MC in the modern world. Would you consider that as a novel with a romance/harem tag?
Okay it mostly boils down to two main issues. 1: The writing is awful. I am referring to grammar and spelling.2: It premiums at 20 chapters. This limits any insights into most all categories in the review so I defualt to low ratings because in the first twenty chalters nothing is given out which makes this story worth buying more chapters except the genre itself. In fact there is the aforementioned poor writing which makes you think twice about EVER giving the story your money. TL;DR : Dont waste Your time on an early premium story with poor writing unless you have absolutely nothing else to spend fast passes on. 1.8/5
This is just trash.Not worth reading...
A hard working MC blacksmith in a military camp. So far, so good the plot is moving forward without too many stereotypes. A recommended read if you enjoy this genre.
Ok, so, basically, when the story starts he wakes up in a castle and is hatched by a girl. At the start, that was my problem. I like MCs where they are independent but he gets trapped by this girl is forced to be his familiar and the girl forces him to do things. I did not like this because it hindered his growth and also the girl was pretty annoying. Than he finally escapes. YAAA!!! But he misses her. BOOOOO!!! I mean like, you are free! Come on, grow up, forget about her! But noooooo! Instead, he finds her again and goes up to her and tells her who he is, even though he is free! That is at the point where I just dropped this, no questions asked. If you like independent MCs who do not care about anyone else like me, this novel is not for you. Even though I rated this a 3.2, my personal rating would be 0.1.(Dropped Chapter 26)
I like it. MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE.
