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The chapter after "the coveter's ending" is not there
Hinata bs. yep, don't waste your time lads.
Excellent story of two people from different worlds fighting through the good and bad to make it through with their relationship, Averie and Giles and problems they face.
Yazarı ne kadar tebrik etsem azdır çok güzel kaleme alınmış bayıldım (: Mutlaka okumalısınız pişman olmazsınız gerçekten yazmayı hiç bırakmaman dileğiyle
a book on trial read.its good.the concept of cheat is good.but the story progression lack strengthMc is a regret burden ambitious careless helped by plot a lot.and the relationship of power is not clearly explainAnd the story lack logic.no offence to anyone but this is an honest but netral review.
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Already more than 500 chapters I have two questions please your novel is close to the end or not yet? And do you plan to use the function on wn that allows you to make a novel free for 24 hours? maybe one day ? It will attract more people since we see it on the home page and it will allow other readers to continue
It’s actually good. MC is a coward? He is cultivating as cultivators do. Most of the novel is focused on him ascending the ranks and his lifespan increasing. He avoids obvious tropes that lead to trouble, living the ascetic cultivator lifestyle. Give it a try.
One way to describe this novel, quite odd and unique at the same time:I know the beginning is quite shocking especially with the main character suicide, but at the end he got the consequence which is become something like a lifeless doll which. As he become the lifeless doll, he met with three strange girls that had a distinct personality with one another.For me is pretty interesting take on and there is some direction that the author can dig up more with the relationship between the three mysterious girls. The three mysterious girl is itself have their appearance and demeanor very diverse with one another that I can't wait for their development for the future and also the main character too when he interacted with those girlsAs for the flow of the story is quite smooth for me so far, but for the description, I believe the author can give more in next few chapters. Anyway, that's all I have to say about this novel and keep up the good work with weird, story(it's just only my opinion)
"When I was 9 I was 25. I went to school on 1 foot up hill both ways. I went to school before physics was invented. I had to fight two lions everyday. The same lions. Now they do my taxes. My other foot was off starting a business." -Steven He's Dad
It’s okay but the story is kind of scrambled Buuuuuuuuttt the theme is like animeAs for the characters it could use more information on the villain and the plot picks up in The second volume but it’s okay
