boss, am giving you a 5* caz i am broke but you helped me and made this book a limited free timed . so thanks , ???
Amazing novel!I’m at chapter 101 and I’m loving it!
Nice beginning I'm not a fan of BL but I'd give this a chance.... it's nice and well paced although would have loved it if it was normal romance anyway keep up the good work(u2060●u2060♡u2060∀u2060♡u2060)
story suffers from a lack of flow, it's very event to event based, and it's hard to read at certain points do to sentence structure not being the best. fights can be hard to imagine and as stated above with the event to event based reading it feels like details are left out at certain points. still think its worth reading it's just rough
im liking this alot so far. i really like how your mcs think, as well as their ideals.this one is similar to legion, so hes peak!
I don't like how mc gets NTR left and right, if don't like the story where mc gets NTR it's not for you.
"Opzzzz ... I can feel the presence of supernatural beings in you."
Never! Never!
Gritting his teeth he faces the source, pushing harder despite the pain, Once he's close enough he fully faces the man, then reaches out with his hand and stops the beam from even leaving the helmet, The backlash knocks the man into the side of the van and limply to the ground.
"Good morning class..." He entered the classroom. Everyone who stood around or wasn't on their seat rushed to go back.
Your brain gets smart but your head gets dumb
HP- 100