Chyan One-Shots (HSM)

Amazing story! keep it up

A story woth potentiel but butchered by the worst translation i have had the missfortune to read.

I like the story.....keep writing ?☺ please continue........I like the story.....keep writing ?☺I like the story.....keep writing ?☺I like the story.....keep writing ?☺I like the story.....keep writing ?☺

it's bad. The description was interesting and the first chapter was good but the moment he lands back in time, we get the cliche young master wanting women scenario. His focus should be to raise his strength instead of hitting on women right of the bat.Honestly, there are 100s of novels like this one out there. Not original in the slightest. MC is literally a moron which holds true from the first chapter title. all in all, it's bad.

Author's been bugging me for quite some time now for a review so here goes.It's good. There's action, there's haŕem and there's weird powers. Some stuff are quite basic and some scenes are dramatic for no reason.But overall, not bad. In fact, dare I say  it's good. Ya Happy now, Yet?

It's the first time, I'm reading this kind of story. It's definitely nice to read. In fact, I'm already in love with this universe and it's characters. In the beginning only, the ML is weirdo. Your idea is really good.