Jion47
"Then who?" Her mother grinned.
Great synopsisOr storyline but make the chapter longer not just 1-2 pageOther author have a minimum of 7-8 pagesOh and spacesI dont know about english though but its ok for me cause i can read it and i understand it Oh and other authors use " " this when speaking cause its noticeable and ' ' for thoughts ..........................................????? idk but great start though
"Eat first, you must have forgotten!?" Because of the excitement Yun Fulang became forgetting his recommendation letter. "eat first, your grandfather gave to the mother, after eating, mother give"
After spending the whole day on this boring school, I finally made my way out of the classroom. Then my teacher suddenly blocked my path on the hallway and approached me about the principal's command for me to go to the student council.
[The name is already taken]
"No! Elaine!" Ban kept on trying to release himself but to no avail.
Because I was so happy to leave, I rushed down from the third floor to the door, but I saw a goblin blocking the way.
"Don't need to." (Jack)
"Do as you do." Rex stopped for a moment, " how many floors are ready?"
Feeling heat from his head travel down to his right arm which holds the stones he can feel the heat reach his fingertips before the "stone" starts to glow a brilliant radiance.
' Swoosh ' Finally, I see it. The sword line was fast, and looks distracting since I saw like two are three lines at the same time, and it went straight next to my face, seems dangerous.
With relative ease he put his sword up to block a rather speedy blow to the neck.
