good thread but distroyed it perfectly.mc has no commonsense . writing is very bland. feel sleepy... nothing new in this novel..if this is your first gaming novel you can try read few chapters..
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im past chapter 100 and mc is still in the body of a girl after getting unbound and honestly i've given up on this story, im not sure how there have been no comments or awkward moments with him being in that kind of situation but sure i guess.
Nice story the story is an eye opener and it gave me ideas not just one but many for my next story
Haven't read it it yet, but the story seems promising. been kinda bored with other stories as they all follow the general plot line, with alot of plot armor. hopefully this isn't one of those stories.
Pretty great book so far. Initially you would want to smack the MC on his head but he forces himself to change and his transformation feels natural.And his abilities are pretty freaking great :0Very well written chapters with a lot of stuff going on and yet everything fits in a proper flow.
nth day he rested from all his work.3Then God blessed the seventh day and made it holy, because on it he rested from all the work of creating that he had done.Adam and Eve4This is the account of the heavens and the earth when they were created, when the LORD God made the earth and the heavens.5Now no shrub had yet appeared on the earthand no plant had yet sprung up, for the LORD God had not sent rain on the earth and there was no one to work the ground,6but streamscame up from the earth and watered the whole surface of the ground.7Then the LORD God formed a manfrom the dust of the ground and breathed into his nostrils the breath of life, and the man became a living being.8Now the LORD God had planted a garden in the east, in Eden; and there he put the man he had formed.9The LORD God made all kinds of trees grow out of the ground—trees that were pleasing to the eye and good for food. In the middle of the garden were the tree of life and the tree of the knowledge of good and evil.10A river watering the garden flowed from Eden; from there it was separated into four headwaters.11The name of the first is the Pishon; it winds through the entire land of Havilah, where there is gold.12(The gold of that land is good; aromatic resinand onyx are also there.)13The name of the second river is the Gihon; it winds through the entire land of Cush.14The name of the third river is the Tigris; it runs along the east side of Ashur. And the fourth river is the Euphrates.15The LORD God took the man and put him in the Garden of Eden to work it and take care of it.16And the LORD God commanded the man, “You are free to eat from any tree in the garden;17but you must not eat from the tree of the knowledge of good and evil, for when you eat from it you will certainly die.”18The LORD God said, “It is not good for the man to be alone. I will make a helper suitable for him.”19Now the LORD God had formed out of the ground all the wild animals and all the birds in the sky. He brought them to the man to see what he would name them; and whatever the man called each living creature, that was its name.20So the man gave names to all the livestock, the birds in the sky and all the wild animals. But for Adamno suitable helper was found.21So the LORD God caused the man to fall into a deep sleep; and while he was sleeping, he took one of the man’s ribsand then closed up the place with flesh.22Then the LORD God made a woman from the ribhe had taken out of the man, and he brought her to the man.23The man said, “This is now bone of my bones and flesh of my flesh; she shall be called ‘woman,’ for she was taken out of man.”24That is why a man leaves his father and mother and is united to his wife, and they become one flesh.25Adam and his wife were both naked, and they felt no shame.the third month, which is the month of Sivan, on the twenty-third day. And an edict was written, according to all that Mordecai commanded concerning the Jews, tothe satraps and the governors and the officials of the provincesfrom India to Ethiopia,127 provinces,to each province in its own script and to each people in its own language, and also to the Jews in their script and their language.Alussa Jumala loi taivaan ja maan.2Maa oli autio ja tyhjä, pimeys peitti syvyydet, ja Jumalan henki liikkui vetten yllä.3Jumala sanoi: »Tulkoon valo!» Ja valo tuli.4Jumala näki, että valo oli hyvä. Jumala erotti valon pimeydestä,5ja hän nimitti valon päiväksi, ja pimeyden hän nimitti yöksi. Tuli ilta ja tuli aamu, näin meni ensimmäinen päivä.6Jumala sanoi: »Tulkoon kaartuva kansi vesien väliin, erottamaan vedet toisistaan.»7Jumala teki kannen ja erotti toiset vedet sen alapuolelle ja toiset sen yläpuolelle. Niin tapahtui,8ja Jumala nimitti kannen taivaaksi. Tuli ilta ja tuli aamu, näin meni toinen päivä.9Jumala sanoi: »Kokoontukoot taivaankannen alapuolella olevat vedet yhteen paikkaan, niin että
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Nice novelI can't stop reading this. I want more chaptersPls vote this guysRead this A must read novelEven though it's only 60 chaptersVote vote!!!!