Jion47
thanks for the spoiler you just saved half of my iq
Doesn’t the author decide to update anymore? It’s been 11 months now!
Its bcom boring the more u read.
Lin fan didn't actually have boundless mana in fact it is much more better. He has a system where people that he killed he will get their dropped skill, mana or cultivation depending on his luck and every skill that dropped he will get the highest level even though the victim only learned that skill until second level but lin fan will get the highest level.
Why does almost every man wanna make a 10-13 year girl a concubine or just eat her...
It's a laid-back story with a system that's not going to destroy the world's power system (at least until chapter 32) and has quite a bit of potential
A million girlfriends, new one every 3-6 months - Its the most annoying thing in this novel, ruining story for me. Does mc have nothing better to do? His loyalty is non existent, its a miracle he is still loyal to humanity and not a retard traitor like mc in Avatar or smth.
MISERY!I'm sorry this just hit wrong for me.I'm a blue collar worker in a dead end job, and I listen to web novel to escape that.This story is probably hilarious in China, but for me it's too much pain instead of slapstick.Fourth wall is constantly broken, taking the reader by the shoulder and complaining about kids today,the bad job market, how ridiculous a cultivation world is-- I'd say that it's a parody of the whole cultivation novel genre. The MC has endless bad luck after he is swept away from his mediocre life as a 20 year old to become a hopeless old man who's golden finger is to be a janitor in a cultivation academy, and level up from cleaning.That alone could have been enough or even epic. But as of 21 chapters in, it was too miserable for me to endure anymore.It's definitely meant to be tongue in cheek but it hit too close to home for me to enjoy.
The first few chapters of this story showcase a mix of different genres, including fantasy, comedy, and adventure. The author's writing style is engaging and descriptive, which allows readers to easily visualize the scenes in their minds. The characters are distinct and have unique personalities that make them interesting to follow, and the dialogue between them is well-written, with humor and wit sprinkled throughout.However, there are some areas that could be improved upon. The transitions between different scenes and perspectives could be smoother to prevent confusion, and there are some grammatical errors and typos that could be corrected with thorough editing. Additionally, some parts of the story feel rushed, especially toward the end where a lot of information is presented in a short amount of time.Overall, the story has potential but could benefit from some editing and revisions to improve the pacing and clarity of the story.
monster girl = yes By the way author do you have a discord? ....................................... ........................................
Very interesting premise, top notch writing quality and a power system that makes you want to learn more about it. Writing this at only 20 chapters in, but I recommend people to try, if for nothing else then simply because the authors previous novel was incredible.
why dis trash got picked up?
