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This novel is good for those readers who want to read forbidden relationship between mom and her son and harem. I like this novel so far and hope it keep updating.?
good job, author.........................................................................................................................................keep it up
the synopsis was pretty captivating and for those who love fantasy would have been a massive draw. the author is a good writer and knows how to flow well with words but reading the first few chapters I didn't exactly find what I was expecting...still trying to figure out how the first few chapters connect though(will probably find that out in the later chapters).the grammar was spot on and the author no doubt is a skilled writer.
It is not a marvel but it is entertaining, now I will talk about the things that I consider that I do not like about this novel ...The MC is kind of silly, although mostly it is from not having knowledge about something, even without that it is. I have read more than 140 chapters and so far he is very innocent, enemies have already appeared that could harm him and his loved ones if they were not strong enough and still strives to have mercy not to "kill". In chapter 138 they made a clone of him and he considered that it ruined the romance, because even if it is a clone of him, it is as if he was someone else and it bothers me, I do not know if the clone disappears or they destroy it quickly at some point, I I would like a lot...From the last thing I just said, I have to abandon it, if someone knows if the clone disappears in any chapter, they can tell me.
Mttl?........................................................................................................................................................
we need raws -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Translation kinda sucks, but oh well. Story is pretty enjoyable, and it’s fun to read lots of cliches when you are bored. Really hope they expand more on this world though.
Well written with lots of potential but unfortunately lacking in a few aspects. This novel has great writing quality and an engaging and entertaining plot, compared to most webnovels this is definitely in the top 1% however there are still a few things that should definitely be fixed. (As of chapter 86) The timeline makes no sense. The game started in January of 2100, however he doesn’t meet Emma (Lotus) until into 2102 (According to his last life flashback). Although the events that have taken place in the story so far seem like they may have happened in a week they ‘supposedly’ happened over a few months, even then it would still be early or mid 2100, in six months his mother would be dead. No need to mention 2102 plus however many months it took for him and Emma to have a serious relationship. Another major plothole I’ve realized while writing this is the supposed ‘months’ that have passed. All the fighting has taken place over the course of a few days, not counting time in between events, this is fine, they could have been doing lots of stuff in between that we just don’t see, but we can tell this is not happening since the MC has no growth between events, all his skills, levels, items etc have been gained in the mere few days we have seen. So unless you are going to tell me that he has been spending the majority of these multiple months he has been playing and supposedly been to busy to spend time with his parents (according to a few chapters ago) doing absolutely nothing this simply doesn’t make any sense. Even if this time issue was fixed and the time was compressed back to a few days it would still not fix the issue of his mother living years past when she supposedly died. The next point isn’t a plot hole but something that irks me endlessly the main character is pathetic and brain dead. Why did he not immediately get his mother checked for cancer and treatment when reincarnated. You would think they would have a whole lot of a better chance at treating cancer if you noticed it 1-2 years earlier, but no, he says nothing. Second the whole situation with Emma honestly frames the MC to be a weak and pathetic simp. And then we have this last chapter where he just completely goes off the rails the second he hits some adversity, he hasn’t event attempt to change his mom’s future yet and now he’s going to throw his life away, again, sad and pathetic. Additionally the ease at which he gains power and the OPness of the power he gains is a bit annoying, I’m not trying to complain about the MC being OP in a OP mc novel but it seems like it’s gone a little to far. He can turn into a ghost indefinitely and still use his esper powers (which might I add have no energy cost) to kill whatever he wants. While as a ghost it seems he cannot be harmed by physical attacks, infact we have not yet seen him get harmed at all while a ghost (Does this make him invincible? I assume there is some limit, even still it seems like to most creatures cannot harm him while he can kill whatever). If this wasn’t enough with synergy between his fire skill and the skill that lets him change into an animal he can turn into a phoneix, with his flames around him even if he dies (which he does) he simply is reborn in the fire and can continuously deal damage to more powerful enemies without any risk. (Again, is he invincible? I’m honestly not sure)
really promises to be great, don't give it up, but all in all, I would like to see mc as king or at least some general I can't wait for him to come and show others his power, for example in the fight with a dragon
the MC is basically... not a person? has no motivation, randomly goes to where The Plot is happening, and the story just feels cheap? like I could not care any less about any of the characters, they all just feel super flat
Is this novel droppedHope not I really injoyed this novel