[Dropped] Atg World

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Not amazing, but certainly not bad. It didn’t really grip me, this is likely due to the writer being new and thus less able to engage the reader. However, the grammar was fine and the pacing thus far is pretty decent. I also enjoy the premise, and thank god for no system or wishes. Will be interesting to see if the author can keep up his writing and make this story into something special.

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It's a nice read. A great plot, smart MC, and unique world background. The MC is out to achieve a significant goal which is great to read. It also has a great romantic plot. Summary: It's worth reading.Thanks for sharing this with us Author-San.

     He didn't know what he was doing. He was never responsible for Otis before, and he never had younger siblings to care for. He was just winging it and was failing. Failing terribly.

"Yes, Sir."