Actually, an interesting idea, I liked it. Although 20 chapters is not enough to build an opinion, but the potential is there for the book. The author has a lot of room to develop - that's undeniable, however I like his writing style.My advice is to pay more attention to the detailing of the environment and characters (of course, you don't need to overdo it), but otherwise you're doing a good job.
Thanks to the event, I discovered this book, I will definitely give it a chance ?
So far the novel is amazing, and chapter 5 was PEAK. Ottabie, I known you are listening. Please give me more Lieutenant Kross. Anything is fine so PLEASE give me more chapters.
It's your darling author here.Please support my new work. it starts out sad but trust me it's good. drop a comment whenever you guys can. trust me I read them all ❤️
I wonder who was that "guy" in chapter 3 yet he was Beyonder ranker!? What is name though I hope it will be shown in new chapter, since I just saw in Volume 2 2nd chapter will be origin of Emperor War I guess everyone one knows About Emperor War other than Sarah in this world, maybe that guy name will be reveal.
The sound of our bell ringing.
When I flying, the views of houses and buildings are clearly visible from here.
"Hello there," said a Doctor while waving his hand to me.
Never! Never! Never! Never! Never!
Angel is a creature of Light creation and they servant of his own creator.
"Carl, we just want to know why you did this, please answer seriously, we just want to help you."
Meanwhile, Arthur covered his ears, he did not know that his father was screaming like a child when his mother hit him. Shrugging, he observed the gym where he would spend many hours taking his body to the limit.