HenriettaOtu
First chapter in and I'm instantly hooked. A bit disappointing as it only has two chapters, but please keep up updating as I will be supporting this novel.The world building is great, pacing is absolutely fantastic it felt like I was in the book and fully immersed. How you portray the characters make me feel hatred (looking at you, Ragnar) and awe. Overall, a great novel in the making!
I like this novel but I’m just curious if you drop this novel
Honestly a good start, Author keep it up!
it's good ? I loved it. it's obviously the writer is new here but he or she is developing and i like that
Shameless author self-review. God knows I need the self-review if none of my readers are ever gonna' review my book LMAOI really like where I'm going with the story. I have a lot of ideas and a rough plan of where the story is going but....I am listening!!!If you have ideas or cool fight scene choreography or ANYTHING! Comment! Review! Power stones! Communicate with me somehow! Please! I'm lonely as heck!Anyways, as always, keep reading, keep reviewing and commenting, and last but not least... Keep spiting!
Already at Chapter 72 and it was great! I just want to ask if when, by any chance. the girl named Jasmine will go? HAHAHAHAHHA She's becoming annoying already
This story has a lot of potential, hope mc aspires to gain power and eternal life
Needed free pass so reviewed..
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Hey people...This is my first attempt at trying to harness the gift of the pen, so I plead with you all to forgive all detected errors and short-comings, as the mistakes of a imperfect author.You all are free to criticize and ask radical questions ..I will surely reply them in the comments.Once more forgive me and prepare to suffer the danger of been addicted.
Love the novel! Love the novel! Love the novel! Love the novel! Love the novel! Love the novel! Love the novel! Love the novel! Love the novel! Love the novel! Love the novel! Love the novel! Love the novel!
At first glance i liked the book and added it to my reading list but then the more i read it, i found multiple grammatical errors and some of the paragraphs don't even make sense AT ALL. And some of the things the female lead actor does or says are complete falacy like she knows she's a werewolf but denies it? i mean hatred is one thing but denial of existence is something else nd she changes schools and promises to avoid attention even using wigs but then she's asking for a party invite, talking back to a bully and even the school's bitches, dressing to impress, wanting to make friends with popular students, etcetra.... is a bit contradicting for me and i suggest the author to go back and make an edition.
