Dimensional Soldier

Nice it's okay I just like your bookearly to get excited but reading is the best

? had me hooked from the start! I really like the way you tell the story, MC seems like a super awesome guy by the way he cares for his little brother and then is forced to this other world bc he cares for him to much ? Your writing quality is really nice for not knowing english very well so No complaints from me there. The flow is smooth too not too fast. your doing great ?

Translation is messed up but good character and story development all around ????????????????????????????????????????????????

What this novel needs is an editor. I like this type of novels and its frustrating to read a novel with broken words. The story has no problems so far till chapter 25

Great work for first time I hope you will keep posting new chapters as soon as possible I waiting.Hope to se new characters and good character development

Keep it going to write good story..i really enjoy it...?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????