This novel started as a romantic comedy with some action, but now it’s just a battle fantasy with almost zero plot development. 100 chapters in, and it’s all just back-and-forth episodes with nothing being revealed. The romance plot? Besides a few one-time scenes, it’s nonexistent because, once again, nothing is developing.
Overall, this story is enjoyable to read. I would honestly tell you to give it a try. The mystery keeps the reader engaged, and I like the idea of superpowers. *However, I most definitely have complaints. 1. It’s really frustrating with how much the MC feels like he has to save everyone every single second. 2. The only two girls the MC actually has sex with completely disappear and become irrelevant afterwards. Youd think their would be feelings at all. 3. And my biggest frustration, the MC being captured and tortured for 20+ days when everyone else is getting stronger and having to rescue his sorry butt is not enjoyable to read. What makes it worse is the fact that he’s in that predicament because he sacrificed himself for someone portrayed to be bad. As much as I enjoyed the overall story, I don’t know if I’ll continue reading if the MC won’t wake up the next few chapters. Especially if he’s weak as hell.
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This novel is written very well with no time wasted on over describing, whilst producing vivid descriptions that really add the MC's world and his predicament.I really like how the story picks up from the first chapter and progression is made rather quickly.Great job, author!
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This is a great book , I can't get enough of it
l love this novel book. keep move forward with new chapters in book
the Mc is so stupid it's not even funny.. 12 chapters in and he's still stupid.. and the smartest thing he did is wish for wisdom..knowledge and comprehensiveness.. but he's still stupid.. like how can you have all that and be so specially stupid.. even while free I can't read this.. such a shame
I am having a good time reading this book. thanks author for the wonderful world you are creating.
It is a book with an interesting narrative. Although there are three or five small details that disrupt the flow, they are not that disturbing. It's just that the time jumps are not a good alternative way of moving from scene to scene. I would have preferred a little description of the journey.I wish you success! Write lots of chapters, okay?
A well planned novel. I can't wait to read it to the end.