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I really wanted to like this story. It does some things quite well, and at first it seemed like a really fresh experience, but after a while it began to seem like a one-trick pony. Basically it relies way, way too heavily on gimmicks. These gimmicks are what made the story interesting in the beginning, but the author seemed to lack the ability to properly incorporate them into a real story, and instead just made /everything/ about this gimmick, to the point that it becomes a crutch that eventually drags the story down.It tries very hard to be funny, and it does succeed at times, but mostly just hammers home the same juvenile, unfunny jokes until they become a serious annoyance.A good author would have taken that concept that worked in the beginning and subtly integrated it into a "proper" story, rather than relied on the gimmick to carry them through and overuse it again and again and never actually get to writing anything worth reading about.

HOLY CR*P, this is F*cking realistic noise bro but althougth im still at chap 2 it's really nice and realistic gotta make sure you did your reaserch too bro good luck too!

Great Start! Has an enjoyable main character that reincarnates to a game world using an understandable premise. Doesn't rush the explanations and is able to pace the story well. MC is OP but his personality is good and not too arrogant (he is relatively funny). Will read if the author decides to keep writing.

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This story keeps you hooked from start to finish! A wild ride from the beginning the author creates a world you can get lost in. Told from the mind of the main character, the reader gets a window into the thoughts which keeps you engaged and invested in discovering the story of the main. 10/10 would read again!