Hi! This is Ada, an editor of the international Suspense/Thriller Writing Contest I. I see great potential in your book, but your book is so underrated here. Thus, I invited you to join the contest a week ago. Please reply to me. Let’s discuss in detail.
this is just copy and past of the same novel already on web novel under the same name that already has 200 chapters. the only difference is the other one doesn't have locked chapters. recommend reading over there instead of wasting your daily chapter unlocks
Writing Quality (Translation) ★• Translation is a good or even worst than MTLStory Development ★★• MC transmigrated to a world called "Blue Planet" where a game called "Heaven" has fallen upon them, there's a ranking system and of course the mc has no parents troupes..Character Design ★• The mc is very predictable, with no development, just him and his narcissistic self.. He even wanted his saber to call him "Big Brother" instead of "Master
The story is refreshing. What a surprise!
I was only able to get through the third chapter before quitting this novel. The writing is so bad. Practically every paragraph has something grammatically wrong with it. Hopefully it gets better, but I won't be wasting my time waiting to find out.
you author Nessy deserve lots of hearts❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️?
I love this book I know I'm pretty late but, this book was not what I was expecting and I just couldnt pull away, next thing I know I'm on chapter 80 so really good read.
OP tag is lie
Alright, I'll be honest, I only read 3 chapters. So why the review? Purely for people who wants a short review.-This novel is like 'I am a legendary boss' or 'The legendary mechanic', yes, the mc transmigrated in the game as a mob.-He has something called 'template manager', with the information i have been given in the first three chapters and considering it's name, I guess he can change his appearance, attributes ect. with it. Not sure though.-Btw, small spoiler, he is transmigrated as a bandit goon and players are already in the game (Beta test?). Unlike other novels with 60 chapters ish until the players come.-I have rated the novel 3 stars on story development, character design and world background so don't come say: You didn't read anything, why the low score?-3 stars is just a bare minimum score to rate a novel average, not too low like 1 star or high like 5 star. Though I did rate translation quality and SOU 5 stars because I always do in TRIAL READ.
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Hey there!Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact [email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
Hey there!Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact [email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.