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This novel is well written so far! It definitely feels different to a lot of the other mmorpg novels out there and I’m here for that!
Ok So i came here looking for an Evil MC webnovel and it seem we all have the same though when will the first chapter come? I will leave a 5 star review with the hope in my heart that it will turn into a dragon one day from being snake.
I'm loving this story at the moment the world is great and sucks you in story development is good quality is up there for WN all around i think this is a 4/5.
I would like to say " this novel is not great but still it's a great" (?) (Idk what I'm sayin xD) Anyway If you like fast paced novel, almost no necessary drama as far as I know, Kingdom building progression ,Cultivation (?) less dialogues more narrations it like I'm reading a summarize biography/history which is great that could save your time reading (it's worth it) and also even if you dislike harem I think you still like this novel where theres no necessary drama, there's romance elements but it feels like there's none at same time because of lack of relationship developments and dialogues (summarized) so you could enjoy it also for harem lovers you still also like based on my expirience reading this novel. I hope author will gonna make it through the end I like this novel and pls don't change your writing style on this novel and still the same .
character is to stupid, and the early life gets rushed through with the writer spending more time trying to justify his stupidity than be writing a believable character
Honestly I had high hopes for this novel. I really enjoyed Gourmet Supplier in another world and hoped this story would take a similar route. However i was entirely disappointed.The Main Character has little redeeming qualities. He relies entirely on the system, and by that i mean entirely. Usually MCs with systems are given tough tasks that require strength of spirit and dedication to complete, this system hands the MC everything on a silver platter and even then MC seems to oblivious to properly take advantage of it. He can't even cook. The system does that for him.The supporting characters are even worse. They seem to have amnesia about any and all prior events. Gratitude does not seem to exist. And in the rare cases it does it is later entirely forgotten. My breaking point was on 2 separate occasions in which MC took in a bandit who was about to kill and r*pe and later the female character that was captured by the bandit got all chummy with a male character who urged her to become the bandits wife.I had hopes for this story, i really did and i gave it a good 30 chapter read, but i have reached my breaking point and will not continue this story.
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✍️I really like it....................A wonderful content. A fantasy novel.Need more romance.(Ricol and Jake❤) my fav. And also John ?. Three stars (Ricol⭐️Jake ⭐️John ⭐️).
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This book is mobbin! I highly reccomend The Drawbacks of Powers it’s a good read! You did a great job Mob Mobbers! ????????????
I had a great time reading this story. The optimism that Michu exhibits is a really fresh perspective along with the direction of his growth. Story has great moments and can really make you feel for the characters at times. I enjoyed my read.