"Good idea, Chris," Fred said as he changed directions to the way of Burger Joint. When they arrived, Chris' hunch was correct.
I didn't know if any of the girls played instruments aside from Mia.
44 (2002/08/13)
suddenly duike shouted!
Just caught up to the story at chapter 458, and it has yet to disappoint me. It's difficult to find novels of this quality at WebNovel. Grammer can still .r slightly improved, but the story itself is top notch.Keep up the good work author, and don't rush the story. The gradual character development of Noel and Anna, along with the improvement in their relationship is definitely a big part of why this novel is so good.
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I really like the premise of the novel the mc’s mentality the magic system seems a bit fun but I am annoyed on how after chapter 38 which I am currently on there are 30+ privleged chapters that I have to spend coins to read that’s fine and all but from chapter 24 I had to use fast passes to reach 38 it’s really annoying that the author has done this when I belive the privleged chapters should be no more than ten
Shameless author is here. I would like to thank everyone who is willing to read my work. I am a fairly new writer but I consider myself a veteran reader. I Would like to think my world is perfect as I published it but I can be biased so take a look yourself and tell me.
Very good novel (writing, uptade and story) and interesting concept, still don't understand why it isn't more popular.
it's a story that can be considered good and bad it depends if you like it
Great start! I am basically a fan of the fantasy genre. Expecting great results from this story after reading the first few chapters!Good Luck!
Like many other reviews have said at firdt this story was pretty enjoyable to read, but then the characters were introduced and it went downhill from their. Heroine 1 falls with MC for no real reason, author has a terrible memory when it comes to any numbers an example is the earlier chapters MC "sells" 2 serums for 50K each and also gets a 100M. Then he goes to buy a bunch of gear worth over 200M, but luckily the MC had a 50% discount so he got it for little over 100M which he forgot about. Story progression was ok at first but then it went downhill from their. Also the r18 are super weird heres an example, MC is banging heroine 1 as heroine 2 is given aphrodisiac and attacked with the intention of rape from generic bad guy 1. Throughout the process of that happening which last about 5 or so chapters. He just keeps on banging heroine 1... I'm just going to stop myself their and not go on a rant, even though I already have.Bye