A LUNA FOR 120 DAYS

You have a nice story but I hope you checked the grammar first. You mixed even simple pronouns, his and her and it's confusing to read. I think readers shouldn't be the one to adjust and try to understand what you've written.

Lovely book I really enjoyed it

Keep it up author! This novel will soom rise to the top! This novel is one of the best out there and a hidden gem! It was so good and amazing! Don't drop or it would be a shame. Top 25 here we go!

Of course I'm shamelessly giving myself five stars. Don't mind me. Crime + Murder Mystery + Horror Is the plan, this is a big shift from my usual stuff so we will see how it goes. This has been on my list of potential ideas forever, even before I thought of my other books. I have a bunch of chapters written up already so I'm gonna have a stab at it.

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so -the TL is badthe plot is stupid, punching a hole in a painting cause he won't give it to you, ffs, even toddlers dont do thati dont know where it will even go, it could have been him telling stories or teaching skills, would have been bad but readable cause the author isnt very clever but i would put up with it, instead its utter garbage...