ill give it a 5 star because it has a lot of potential and its really fun, the atory is developing pretty well, the only bad thing is that there are a lot of grammar mistakes, but the story is really good and still can be read
some clarification regarding Mc of this novel. if you're looking for smart or cunning, or jack all of trade MC, then this novel may not be for you. you can proceed with your search and leave this section.that's the warning now it's for the clarification.I have been reading a lot of complaints saying the mc is dumb or idiot. stop with your twisted logic guys, if someone is not smart it does not mean he's an idiot or dumb. I never created the MC to be smart, he just, a dude who never finished his middle-school and has been fighting on the street for almost half of his life. that's basically the mc's background, a street thug who talks by his fist. Drop your high expectation for him to be cunning or something else.does the mc will change in the future? yes, of course, there will be character development for him. He will change as the story goes on.My idea of the Main Character is not someone perfect in everything, but someone who is good at one thing and uses that thing to the top. I have even an idea to use a disabled as the Main Character. anyway, In this case, the Main Character is good at fighting and he will fight all the way to the top. that's it.if one day, I make a smart main character, he would never be strong, but he just uses his smart brain to solve everything which is extremely hard to create (at least for me, it's hard).That's it, while I am here, the chapter's length is around 1200-2000 words, so sometimes you will feel the chapter is long and sometimes short.
"I want to rest Mom."
Anger potion has a bright red that shines brightly.
Everything was changing even Zero himself was changing at the moment his cultivation had increased again to reach Body cleansing stage peak and one step away from reaching Spirit gathering stage. Zero knew from now on he was the new Manager of Pill Island.
"Great, another cop-out Uchiha ability." Kurama grunted from within the seal.
Only shooting stars
Fed to the rules and I hit the ground running
"Get off my sight once i said" sudden female voice made all the people in the lobby looked up the staircase
'Keep struggling and I'll take care of you,' Lu Cheng warned, his deep, steady voice layered with restrained desire. I need to sit down. This scene. THIS SCENE. Let me walk through it because my heart is still racing. Gu Yueqian is fuming because it's hot and Lu Cheng won't stop cuddling her at night. She grabs the covers, turns her back to him—this tiny act of rebellion, this little pout disguised as a sleeping position. And what does he do? He leans over her. Chest like a furnace. Warm breath on her neck. She's sweating already and she's supposed to be mad at him. She kicks him. In the knee. Hard. And he grunts. Actually grunts. This man who doesn't show emotion to anyone is physically affected by her kick and still doesn't let go immediately. Then she says 'I'm pregnant' like it's a weapon. And his face—'a flash of raw desire crossed the man's cold, stern face. His dark pupils were like a storm brewing.' But he stops. He lets go. Because the book says three months. Reason wins. For now. And then he sulks. He actually SULKs. The text literally says '(Sulking! The kind you can't coax away.)' and I am deceased. This cold, powerful, capable man who can't even share a bed without wanting more and gets rejected and just... curls up and sulkes. Like a big sad dog. The tension between them is incredible. He's restrained, she's irritated but clearly not indifferent, and there's this undercurrent of desire that's barely contained. The fact that he's holding back because of the pregnancy shows he genuinely cares about her and the baby, even if his first instinct is selfish. And she's not cruel about it—she's just firm. 'Sleep. No touching.' And he obeys. This is the kind of romantic tension that makes you want to scream into a pillow. They're married, they're growing closer, but there's this physical distance that's both frustrating and delicious.
You'll never shine if you don't glow
Hey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play