GOD SLAYER: " VEIL OF DESTINY"

This is a really strange yet interesting turn of events for Mildred... Can't wait to see how it plays out. An interesting read indeed.

Oh god, where do I begin…. The actual world-building and concept of going between the Present and Future seem uniquely good. As of 28 chapters, the MC is still an obnoxious idiot whom only validates women if they have large breasts. The author has stated that the character develops over time. But as of now, he’s unbearable. As much as I like the story, the main character and his actions led me to drop it. ?

I've read upto chapter 39 and this are my views so far.1. Great world buildup, the whole ancient technology turned vr is really good and the back intime thing too.2. The mc's buildup is a little underwhleming considering he was one of the most powerful players is hard to believe given his choice in equipment and skills. 3. A good rpg gamer knows that although active skills are important, passive skills are a great boon especially in early and late stages, but so far with his low mp he ends up choosing all the active skills with really no passive boosts, at least mp regen skill or mana potions or something.4. Before he died the mc used quite a few skills. Then you said that they could use skills in the real world. but then his mother gets into an accident and instead of using the skills from the game he decides money matters first, with the possible case of amnesia or even memory loss don't you think the mystical power of the skills would do better than modern medical means, also if they need certain conditions or lvls to use skills in real life you should have specified them early on.5. Now the last, mc has a cheat weapon, it can gain lvls by 'devouring' other equipment, but instead of feeding every equipment you sell most why? since devouring basically any equipment gives it exp then super grind of equipment should have been the way to go. And the mc's constant fear of using better equipment is unfounded in my opinion.But anyway this are all purely my opinion and views and you are the writer and you can do anything you want, but im just laying it out there so that maybe it will help in your endeavours.

İt a realy good novel ı hope you will continue to write.                                                                                    

This novel is a breath of fresh air after seeing all that harem and hero plot being copy pasted I'm sick of reading same plot everytime this novel is based on realism like when a rational thinker reincarnates in anouther world he will surely take the same path as mc. Few things I don't like is how prideful mc is he will take risk just to kill someone who humiliated him as the saying goes "showing off is a fools idea of glory". What I love alot about this novel aside from evil mc is that the pace is so good it's like reading from a professional author because unlike some others your not sucking your novel dry and the pace remains steady which always keeps us the readers wanting more of it. I recommend this novel to everyone.

Xenon:Lola?ate bakit nanlalamig ang mga kamay ni Lola?!