I reached Chapter 14 without realizing it lol Even the fact that I don't usually read roman ce, didn't stop me from reading. I find the story interesting and enjoyable. Especially the transition between Aurelia and Dominic's Pov, keep up the good work ✌️
The story isn't bad. Free chapters are a mess filled with over explanation of the power levels. I don't remember where but there is one chapter are exclusively filled with them. Right after almost same info. I was thinking to drop it when it become for money. But stayed and it become more interesting it still has a lot of heroes thoughts where he explains something umpteenth time again but it become not so obvious. Sometimes I even skip these parts to actual action and storry development. Overall author still keep me invested and I'm interested in being what will happen. but he need to quit explaining things. Readers not inbicils and we can think ourselves sometimes. If it will keep same way I don't know how long I'll be staying with this novel. I'm on around 70th chapters.
I was reading this as a favor to the author but I must say I am incredibly impressed. The use of vivid imagery combined with just right amount of action keeps my interest throughout the entire prologue. I am curious to see this Ojero and what he us all about. But still, so far I am very impressed with his story telling and world building abilities. Well done. Just one critique, what does Lazarus look like?
Quite the misunderstood male lead we have here. First few chapters was a mess between the male and female lead. Hope they reconcile at the end
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The novel is captivating to read. The writing is superb, consistently engaging and interesting. While I anticipated some minor errors due to the author's phone or keyboard (and my familiarity with them), they are easily overlooked given the quality. The character desc. in the first part are strong.. I could vividly visualize! The plot itself is promising, and with further development, I believe this novel has the potential to garner enthusiastic readership.
Keep it up author weldon??????????? sarahaeyor ??????????????????????????????
Another well-written work from our very own Lena~ It combines the charm of apocalypse action and mystery + the sexiness of WW. It's a risky move, combining WW and apoc in WN, but I believe if anyone's gonna pull it off, it's definitely Lena.I am sooo looking forward to the rise of this new subgenre. Gogogo~
this is not a shameless review, this is a genuine author review at Chapter 75. but I'm still shameless, you'll find out if you read.That said, what should you expect from this book?what are the pros and cons?mc hates humans, the hate will grow as time goes on. He's not your normal hero... Have that in mind.the beginning of the book is terribly slow paced.... Humor was used to replace the action.unstable character of the mc, it's a shift, that is because. MC lost his touch with humans and his trying to cooperate with them, spends more time in his mind.Side characters don't have much depths, i'on even know hoe myself, don't ask me, I tried. I just saw it that way..... It changes along the way.Let's just say, I'm not the best at writing peak stories.The story just gets better as you read. Besides, it's my first good book.All I can say Is, my current readers are just patient, and sure they'll get a huge chunk of the meat and bone!If you feel like your're patient enough to join them, fine you can test you patience, but it all depends on you.I'm just grateful I have good readers despite how bad I am at this...Thank you for reading this far!
Ahem, don't mind me while I artificially inflate the rating ~
So far I think this story has amazing potential keep up the great work author
Omg new book 5 stars immediatly. I hope he is good like the first