a very nice and interesting story. reason I'm giving it a 4.6 star review is coz of the grammatical errors otherwise, it's a good book
Intriguing beginning and captivating chapters. I can't wait to see how this plays out. ?
firston a serious note, the writing style is good, and the plot so far is interesting, but there's almost no chapters so i can't really judge... 5 stars coz i liked it.
put this novel for free once so people can read
Vey interesting story and plot. Hope the author will update more chapters as soon as possible
I like how the story took a different turn from the second chapter keeping the suspense that what could’ve happened after the monster appeared, giving it an opportunity to introduce new characters. I’m looking forward to your work! Also, these are the first two chapters but i’d say, we can see the character designs being developed. All the best for your journey!
Dear author, please continue writing! Your style is engaging, and the events of the novel captivate the reader from the very first lines. The detailed descriptions and masterful narration bring the world to life, and the characters possess depth that arouses interest. The suspense you add with each scene makes me eager to know what will happen next. This novel holds immense potential, and I am confident it will become one of the unforgettable stories!
Hello, author here!I’ll keep this brief.World Setting: This story takes place in a modern fantasy world filled with magic, mysteries, and powerful entities.About the MC: The protagonist is a half-dragon, born to the Dragon Queen but forced to live away from her. Their relationship plays a pivotal role in the story. The MC is not overpowered—while he is strong for his age, he has clear limitations and plenty of room to grow.Novel Focus: This novel combines elements of wish fulfillment with a solid, character-driven story. While there are satisfying moments for the readers, the focus is on meaningful development, world-building, and emotional depth.A Note: This is my first time writing, so I’m open to feedback! Please let me know about any mistakes or areas for improvement—I’m eager to learn and grow.Thank you for reading ? Feel free to treat this as a Q&A, and I’ll answer any questions you have!"
A ok read. Though why write a unfinished book? MC gets level up through his actions but I see no system for all the points or attributes an feels unfinished. Also you won't know what day it is or how many days has passed, right now I am assuming 1 chapter is day 1 an so on. Alot of MC survival action are half ass. For example wild banana will not be edible, a coconut doesn't hold enough water for survival, also no mention of guting the fish or sank. What I don't like the most is there is no night watch, like really you got four hostle men an wild animals to watch out for. Author basically skims the survival details an assuming they're actually right while not right. For example doesn't write details of cooking the fish, just said make a fire an cook then moves on. This whole book feels really rushed. This could be a great book but author wasted it's potential.
I really cant say much exept for the fact that this is one of the best webnovels I have read and im only 47 pages in. Though the few issues with the novel is that there was no info about where it took place until chapter 43 I believe, now thats not a bad thing because it allows the auther to make it up until they know what they want, but i also had no idea about how the characters would speak which is a big part of how I see characters. Other than that im quite happy about the developments and the lesser plot armor given to the protag as I really enjoyed there being consecounses to him even if he does fight with puppets. The magic/evolution system is also well laid out and can be understood even with little information. All in all I would put this novel at a good place among the novels I believe to have more development potential than most of the more popular webnovels nowadays.
am still reading but can't help but review , wish l could gift you for your work but it doesn't allow . your book is promising . keep it up
Good book enjoy it! Keep up the good work