The story is original and exciting, but the chapters are a bit too long, try to reduce them in any case I can't wait to see where the story leads
I like the story development and your writing style. Creating an imaginary city is topnotch and I'm getting to know the characters too. But give us more twists. Good work so far.?
First of all, this is a shameless review, I'm biased towards this since this is my writing.Now that that's out of the way, I'll tell you just what this story is going to be about. I was tired of all those web novels that have the title infinite, or unlimited, or my cheat system, so I thought of how I could try to write one that was fresh and unique with even the main character losing sometimes. Where every single person isn't a bumbling fool is bent over backwards for the MC. There will be no harem for the main character. He may be convincing, but he will not be in a harem or have multiple love interests. He will be focused on his survival through any means necessary. I hated to write a unique story where the main character isn't talented or has a trait that will destroy the world, but a story about one man who will use every method possible to succeed and survive.Thank you for reading.
The story is really good. Only started because synopsis was good, INTRIGUING. HOPE YOU don't drop. If you keep the story as you said in synopsis, I'll definitely keep reading
it's a great novel.the journey of this novel will be interesting.
Great plot! Why do I have a feeling her father is plotting behind her back? I love Asli's character. Strong female characters are for the win. Ahmet is also crazy ? Ahmet is a Turkish name. I have been watching quite their series and when I saw the Characters names in this book, I was compelled to read. I dint regret it though... my only problem is there aren't enough chapters. I look forward to reading more.
nice work keep going I'll just reviewing it
Family drama, transmigration, elemental powers, Zombie/Monster apocalypse, and a love story. Interesting mix.
Ek ladki bhigi bhagi siSoti raaton mein jaagi siMili ik ajnabi seKoyi aage na peechheTum hi kaho ye koyi baat hai, hmmDil hi dil mein chali jaati hainBighdi bighdi chali aati hain... (x2)Doondh laut ti huwi balka ti huwiSaawan ke suni raaton meinMili ik ajnabi seoyi aage na peechheTum hi kaho ye koyi baat haiHmmEk ladki bhigi bhagi si..Daagmag daagmag lehki lehkiBhooli badh ki behki behki... (x2)Machli machli gharse nikhliPaghli si kali raaton meinMili ik ajnabi seKoyi aage na peechheTum hi kaho ye koyi baat hai, hmmEk ladki bhigi bhagi si..Tan bheega hai sar geela haiUs kaa koyi pech bhi dheela hai... (x2)Tan ti jhukti chalti ruktiNikli andheri raaton meinMili ik ajnabi seKoyi aage na peechheTum hi kaho ye koyi baat hai, hmmEk ladki bhigi bhagi si
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MC spends most of his time obsessively building a harem for the protagonist. Its been almost a hundred chapters of this and looks like it might go a hundred more. Writing quality is good and the world is really interesting but the harem for someone else thing drags on to long.
attractive poster and title but no chapter has been uploaded !!