Carnal Desires

Author i read until the end of the sorrows of our era (chpt 370)...i really enjoy overall this book but WHY....WHY do you have to push the story by making the stupid...in earlier chapters he was thinking before he did **** he had a thought process...and now he loses it at the most critical moment for no reason...he ignores all signs of danger he doesnt use the s****w for battle but his own body ...i dont understand why do you rush things Ren's purpose was to get stronger so he can protect his brother when did all that gone to ****? He doesnt even try to power up the last 50chapters...you can write a great story...step back and LET THE CHARACTERS BREATHE!!!

everything is great the writing the release rates...the only problem....is the story and mc(complete and utter coward. even system calls him one). Unfortunately i cant see this ever becoming popular.rated 3.4* Ty for writing this and if u enjoy writing this keep going =)

This is actually pretty good but surprisingly so he could use a bit more character development on some of the side characters but overall a decent book

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